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God's breath traverses space beyond body and soul to the spirit deep inside man. A new man can dawn - made in God's image. God makes no mistakes for He rules with both justice and grace. Man can't escape God's breath. Your choice Pray for God's breath before your body dies and your spirit returns to face Him - Almighty, Creator, Sovereign God. He maintains an appointment book, clearly documented. Which page records your choice?
September 25, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 10/4/2014 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Reason.
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Date: 10/4/2014 7:29:00 AM
I have never seen this form before and you crafted a lovely spiritual poem. Congrats on your win. Hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/4/2014 6:27:00 AM
Visiting again to congratulate you, Reason
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Date: 10/4/2014 2:08:00 AM
this is a very sincere spiritual poem that I would have scored higher if you had fixed line five before I judged this . Congratulations in my contest. you do a really nice rictameter.
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Date: 10/4/2014 2:00:00 PM
Andrea, I have edited it to take out the questionable Sov-er-eign from Line 5. It now has 10 syllables which are fairly standard. Thanks for the placement and the heads up on the count. Savior is equally as descriptive.
Date: 9/26/2014 6:48:00 AM
Feel Good to read a Rictameter poem, Reason. good luck
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Date: 9/25/2014 11:19:00 PM
I appreciate your interaction with my poetry, Brenda. Haven't written much lately until today when I had more time than usual. Thanks a bunch.
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Date: 9/25/2014 9:14:00 PM
Hey Reason, I'm also a 9. Very nicely done.
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