Your Captivating Smile (Ignition)

The captivating moon light shows your smile 
Here I sit with visions of you, 
With great plans of our love growing in grand style 
This feeling makes me brand new, 
The imagery of your charm drives me so wild 
Cements our souls with glue, 
Walking hand in hand with you for just awhile 
Closer we drew, 
The style of your smile makes it all worthwhile 
Let’s renew, 
The love of life we hold so true without guile 
Anew, 
What was, is, and forever will be fertile 
Two! 


Comments:    The “Ignition Style” consists of 14-lines with the following meters: 
11-8, 11-7, 11-6, 11-4, 11-3, 11-2, and 11-1. The rhyme scheme is abab etc. It 
begins with an eleven syllable long line and varied syllable short lines. If two 
verses are desired, the second verse must be reversed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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January 17, 2011 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week on PoetrySoup Joseph. Love, Carol
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January 16, 2011 at 9:30 PM
Congratulations on your delightful poem being featured this week on Soup, Joseph. Will attempt this form soon. Beautiful poem! Always Annalise (Audrey)
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