Your Breath Within Me

Sorry I didn't get to read this one. Congrats on publishing

Please tell me about publishing and why you erased the poem.

'Take the Ribbon from my Hair' fine line to a fantastic track by 'Gladys Knight' but what a wonderful line when mentioned when two in love are to abound. Another superlative piece Charmaine, simply wonderful, James :)

WORDS SO VERY BEAUTIFUL FLOATING OF THE PAGE LIKE A BREATH OF CLEAR AIR SWEETLY PLAYS A BREATHTAKING PIECE

this is nice

You are absolutely BLOOMING, Char!...'Take the ribbon from your hair, shake it loose and let it fall'...Oh yes...'Sweet wine' indeed - Tim

Char...such verse takes ones breath away.....thanks for stopping by and glad you could hear me sing!? jimbo

I feel I have been cheated by having never before known the pleasure discovering your talent. What a way to begin the day. I really hope you can take on another avid fan. ... You have left me breathless......Jake

So soft to read, lovely...:):):):)Adarsh

..............Pss., Returning Unto The Scene Of A Dream Wherein, Her Beauty Dwells ~ Keep Brushing Your Splendours, Beautiful Charmaine And Thank You For Being So Sweet! Truly, A Princess A Queen As All These Wonderful Things; 'Cinderella.' Love, John

taking another serving of this fine morsel.... got more, charma... enjoyed!..:)

Always a pleasure to read your beautiful romantic poems, which you write so very well, Charma! Beautiful and elegant! Love, Annalise

I feel like I've been neglectful, Charmaine! Been busy and haven't able to get back with my P-Soup friends... hope we are still friends, lol! If I'm being honest, romance isn't my cup of tea... but you managed to put a nice dreamy quality to this piece that made even an un-romantic like myself read and enjoy. Good job!

Sweet,romantic poetry here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sweet,romantic poetry here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

lovely piece of work.............wow!

Charmaine, you write with such charm, beauty and eloquence. There are so many beautiful lines leading to a wonderful ending. It is a pleasure to read your fine work :)

In sleep your breath within me........ Nice!

Imagery meditation. It remind us to value those in our lives. A beautiful write, Charmaine. Thanks for the greeting on Father's Day. (^_^) Noel

Dear Charmaine, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit As ALWAYS YOUR words ignight the emotions of LOVE buried deep in my Heart. YOUR vivid imagerysoothing to my eyes.Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments on my recent post The boys are chomping at the bit to welcome YOU to the Family I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER -Papa

i like your poem Charma, much respect and peace in the aroma of the twilight due around you. Love the colors in your poem... a sweet poem. .. enjoyed your poem... always~ PD

A dazzling write...kudos. :)

Glittering intimacy Charmaine - very private, very personal, very lovely - J.A.B. %

Sorry haven't been around as much lately! Hope you still love me! LOL IBi move next Tuesday and hopefully back on track after that! Hugs, Jack xoxox

Dolce vino and viola in concerto are in my language! Nice poem