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Your Breath Within Me

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/29/2016 11:57:00 AM
Please tell me about publishing and why you erased the poem.
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Date: 7/17/2014 5:49:00 PM
'Take the Ribbon from my Hair' fine line to a fantastic track by 'Gladys Knight' but what a wonderful line when mentioned when two in love are to abound. Another superlative piece Charmaine, simply wonderful, James :)
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Date: 9/4/2013 3:14:00 PM
WORDS SO VERY BEAUTIFUL FLOATING OF THE PAGE LIKE A BREATH OF CLEAR AIR SWEETLY PLAYS A BREATHTAKING PIECE
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Date: 8/13/2013 8:51:00 AM
this is nice
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Date: 7/3/2013 7:14:00 PM
You are absolutely BLOOMING, Char!...'Take the ribbon from your hair, shake it loose and let it fall'...Oh yes...'Sweet wine' indeed - Tim
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Date: 7/3/2013 7:51:00 AM
Char...such verse takes ones breath away.....thanks for stopping by and glad you could hear me sing!? jimbo
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Date: 6/27/2013 1:00:00 AM
I feel I have been cheated by having never before known the pleasure discovering your talent. What a way to begin the day. I really hope you can take on another avid fan. ... You have left me breathless......Jake
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:34:00 PM
So soft to read, lovely...:):):):)Adarsh
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Date: 6/24/2013 10:45:00 AM
taking another serving of this fine morsel.... got more, charma... enjoyed!..:)
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Date: 6/22/2013 9:46:00 PM
Always a pleasure to read your beautiful romantic poems, which you write so very well, Charma! Beautiful and elegant! Love, Annalise
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Date: 6/21/2013 12:54:00 AM
I feel like I've been neglectful, Charmaine! Been busy and haven't able to get back with my P-Soup friends... hope we are still friends, lol! If I'm being honest, romance isn't my cup of tea... but you managed to put a nice dreamy quality to this piece that made even an un-romantic like myself read and enjoy. Good job!
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Date: 6/17/2013 11:13:00 PM
Sweet,romantic poetry here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/17/2013 11:11:00 PM
Sweet,romantic poetry here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:43:00 AM
lovely piece of work.............wow!
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Date: 6/15/2013 10:28:00 AM
Charmaine, you write with such charm, beauty and eloquence. There are so many beautiful lines leading to a wonderful ending. It is a pleasure to read your fine work :)
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Date: 6/15/2013 6:24:00 AM
In sleep your breath within me........ Nice!
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Date: 6/15/2013 3:58:00 AM
Imagery meditation. It remind us to value those in our lives. A beautiful write, Charmaine. Thanks for the greeting on Father's Day. (^_^) Noel
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Date: 6/14/2013 8:19:00 PM
Dear Charmaine, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit As ALWAYS YOUR words ignight the emotions of LOVE buried deep in my Heart. YOUR vivid imagerysoothing to my eyes.Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments on my recent post The boys are chomping at the bit to welcome YOU to the Family I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER -Papa
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Date: 6/13/2013 7:09:00 PM
i like your poem Charma, much respect and peace in the aroma of the twilight due around you. Love the colors in your poem... a sweet poem. .. enjoyed your poem... always~ PD
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Date: 6/13/2013 5:16:00 PM
A dazzling write...kudos. :)
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Date: 6/13/2013 3:52:00 PM
Glittering intimacy Charmaine - very private, very personal, very lovely - J.A.B. %
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Date: 6/13/2013 2:59:00 PM
Sorry haven't been around as much lately! Hope you still love me! LOL IBi move next Tuesday and hopefully back on track after that! Hugs, Jack xoxox
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Date: 6/13/2013 8:17:00 AM
Dolce vino and viola in concerto are in my language! Nice poem
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Date: 6/13/2013 7:11:00 AM
Just amazing Charma!This goes to my Favs!
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Date: 6/13/2013 12:44:00 AM
Hello, beautiful....soup mail :)
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