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Your Breath Within Me

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David Walker

Date: 11/6/2020 6:42:00 AM

Sorry I didn't get to read this one. Congrats on publishing

Dean Mobley

Date: 2/29/2016 11:57:00 AM

Please tell me about publishing and why you erased the poem.

James Fraser

Date: 7/17/2014 5:49:00 PM

'Take the Ribbon from my Hair' fine line to a fantastic track by 'Gladys Knight' but what a wonderful line when mentioned when two in love are to abound. Another superlative piece Charmaine, simply wonderful, James :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/4/2013 3:14:00 PM

WORDS SO VERY BEAUTIFUL FLOATING OF THE PAGE LIKE A BREATH OF CLEAR AIR SWEETLY PLAYS A BREATHTAKING PIECE

Dom- X-

Date: 8/13/2013 8:51:00 AM

this is nice

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/3/2013 7:14:00 PM

You are absolutely BLOOMING, Char!...'Take the ribbon from your hair, shake it loose and let it fall'...Oh yes...'Sweet wine' indeed - Tim

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/3/2013 7:51:00 AM

Char...such verse takes ones breath away.....thanks for stopping by and glad you could hear me sing!? jimbo

John Posey

Date: 6/27/2013 1:00:00 AM

I feel I have been cheated by having never before known the pleasure discovering your talent. What a way to begin the day. I really hope you can take on another avid fan. ... You have left me breathless......Jake

Adarsh Raj

Date: 6/25/2013 11:34:00 PM

So soft to read, lovely...:):):):)Adarsh

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/24/2013 10:45:00 AM

taking another serving of this fine morsel.... got more, charma... enjoyed!..:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/22/2013 9:46:00 PM

Always a pleasure to read your beautiful romantic poems, which you write so very well, Charma! Beautiful and elegant! Love, Annalise

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/21/2013 12:54:00 AM

I feel like I've been neglectful, Charmaine! Been busy and haven't able to get back with my P-Soup friends... hope we are still friends, lol! If I'm being honest, romance isn't my cup of tea... but you managed to put a nice dreamy quality to this piece that made even an un-romantic like myself read and enjoy. Good job!

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/17/2013 11:13:00 PM

Sweet,romantic poetry here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/17/2013 11:11:00 PM

Sweet,romantic poetry here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Shiraz Iqbal

Date: 6/16/2013 7:43:00 AM

lovely piece of work.............wow!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/15/2013 10:28:00 AM

Charmaine, you write with such charm, beauty and eloquence. There are so many beautiful lines leading to a wonderful ending. It is a pleasure to read your fine work :)

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 6/15/2013 6:24:00 AM

In sleep your breath within me........ Nice!

Noel Villarosa

Date: 6/15/2013 3:58:00 AM

Imagery meditation. It remind us to value those in our lives. A beautiful write, Charmaine. Thanks for the greeting on Father's Day. (^_^) Noel

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/14/2013 8:19:00 PM

Dear Charmaine, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit As ALWAYS YOUR words ignight the emotions of LOVE buried deep in my Heart. YOUR vivid imagerysoothing to my eyes.Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments on my recent post The boys are chomping at the bit to welcome YOU to the Family I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER -Papa

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/13/2013 7:09:00 PM

i like your poem Charma, much respect and peace in the aroma of the twilight due around you. Love the colors in your poem... a sweet poem. .. enjoyed your poem... always~ PD

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 6/13/2013 5:16:00 PM

A dazzling write...kudos. :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 6/13/2013 3:52:00 PM

Glittering intimacy Charmaine - very private, very personal, very lovely - J.A.B. %

Jack Ellison

Date: 6/13/2013 2:59:00 PM

Sorry haven't been around as much lately! Hope you still love me! LOL IBi move next Tuesday and hopefully back on track after that! Hugs, Jack xoxox