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Your Breaking the Girl

Twisting and turning Colliding with in myself, cause of the thought of you. Cause of the thought of you, I have to fight my inner demons, slashing at me; with my own nails; bent and scorch, by the heat of my imagination...because of the thought of you. Your feelings are burning Is it just me? Is it just me, and me only with this desire, when I look at you. Do you feel this too? This feeling I can't describe, but I know I must deny, for I can't consent, if the structure that we built will hold... Or are you seeing me, as I see you, and are willing to let it crumble... But not on top of us, but beneath us, where we could both lay and bask upon each other. You're breaking the girl Pain Bliss Harsh Gentle I can feel you But I am so lost So much going on in just one push into opening this door for me to explore and you gave me the key to enter I can feel you She meant you no harm Did I rush this on you? I didn't rush this did I? You wanted it too right? ...why do you cry? Was it too much? I felt o so much o so much o so much... was it too much for you? please don't cry please don't cry... Think you're so clever I thought... I thought you wanted this... But now... I'm not sure what I feel... What is this all I feel... I feel every thing at once... But... Mostly... I'm so confused... I thought I knew... What were we doing... But now you must sever Could I just look into you, look into you, as you were watching me before, above you. So unsure you watched me above you. Wanting like I did, yet cursing as soon as it was done, yet, still needing me to finish, yet wanting it to end. Yet... Still needing me to finish. You're breaking the girl Please, please, please, stop trembling. Please, please, please... I'm holding you tight, I'm unsure, but every things going to be alright. ...Your holding me too... I know I came too soon, but you let me enter you, and we both thought we were right, but we're still just on the ground, when we both tried to reach for the sky and we reached to far and burned our hands, but together we'll heal... we'll be alright... He loves no one else Are you tired? I just want to sleep, just right here next to you... you've calmed down... just want to stay... here... with you. "Twisting and turning Your feelings are burning You're breaking the girl She meant you no harm Think you're so clever But now you must sever You're breaking the girl He loves no one else" -RHCP

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Date: 3/30/2010 10:39:00 AM
Thnx for reading and leaving comments on my pieces...means a lot...I'm asking Audrey to leave this comment for me. .....Jimmy
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Date: 3/30/2010 6:29:00 AM
ARe you familiar with the song "Breking the Girl" by the REd Hot Chili Peppers? That is what the poem reminded me of. Stimulating work! Yours Matthew Anish
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