Your Ass Belongs to the Army

They say the journey to adulthood is supposed to be a slow coming of age process that allows the time to contemplate what role we’ll play in our future. We check off all the options. Burn out some brain cells in college or maybe find that ‘special someone’ and take a few years to plan a life. One sunny day in May of 1975, a recruiter asked “Why Not?” I replied, “Might as well.” Two days later some drill sergeant in a Smokey the Bear hat was screaming his bad breath into my face. Growing up only took 48 hours.

You will never know
Til you spread your wings and try—
Sweet taste of freedom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 7/7/2024 10:29:00 AM
Ha, ha, ha! That's why God made drill sergeants the way He did... lol. I can tell you that drill sergeants are almost the same way in Israel -- although not quite as loud -- at least during basic training. Once you're assigned to a unit though, they lighten up a little.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 7/7/2024 2:23:00 PM
It has been a moment or two since my military days. I hear that now they can't even yell at you.
Date: 7/7/2024 8:59:00 AM
Awesome write thank you for your service have a great day
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Date: 7/7/2024 8:04:00 AM
I think we all heard a variation on that theme from the guy in the "big" drill instructor's hat....mine...."I don't care who your heart belongs to ... but your ass belongs to me"
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Date: 7/7/2024 7:13:00 AM
Wow! What a rude awakening! Thank you for growing up as you say in 48 hours!
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Date: 7/7/2024 3:34:00 AM
A verse of wisdom Jerry, I hope it wasn't a bad experience for you. You're right, nothing tastes sweeter than freedom. Tom
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