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Youngest

As the oldest child, I got to choose Before my other sibs. From where to sit or what to do, I was awarded dibs. The fact of being older meant I had a certain clout That might have caused resentment But was always straightened out. My younger grandchild, though, believes Her status holds the keys To open every door she can Which “youngest” guarantees. She doesn’t think it’s fair the order Of her brother’s birth Allows him any privileges, But then, for what it’s worth, If “oldest” has no value, “Youngest” has to be the same. Too bad there is no middle child Around to fan the flame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/2/2023 7:13:00 PM
Love it, Ilene... btw, as the oldest of three, the younger two being sisters -- our M.O. was 'Ladies first.' So my 'status' as elder was hollow as a tin can! lol. Glad you had a turn at the top, Ilene!
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Date: 4/30/2023 11:58:00 AM
Hi Ilene Your poem made me smile for so so many reasons as being the second child i can relate lol but the best thing is I am back to read your amazing lines i have so missed reading about your lovely grandchildren:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/29/2023 8:17:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Perfect penning, Ilene. One of my sisters was the 'middle child.' She claimed it was like being stuck in a sandwich: You get eaten from each end...
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Date: 4/29/2023 6:31:00 PM
LOL Being the baby of my family carried no privileges. i do love the logic, Ilene. Very funny:)
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Date: 4/29/2023 2:08:00 PM
Well it seems she's standing up for herself which isn't a bad thing. Hope your weekend is going well Ilene. Tom
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