Rhoma Em Poet Ode

Young Star

Above the red horizon
she peeps to smile at me,
with buds in her tossed hair
lighting her warm glances.

My fingers sketch young eyes,
distant- blue across the clouds
as we cuddle in spirit
dear baby, a star.




Rhoma Em
Shine With Your Naani 
for nette onclaud--- 19th of June,2014

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Funom Makama April 28, 2015 at 9:13 AM Reading through your words gives a majestic result of creating expectations and at the same time meeting them. This is awesome considering the feat achieved in a few lines. Great write friend and please keep on letting your heart speak for us to learn and enjoy. A def 7

Poet Destroyer A July 4, 2014 at 10:07 AM Rhoma, Congratulations, in Nette's " SHINE WITH YOUR NAANI!!" Contest :) LINDA

Elaine George July 4, 2014 at 7:28 AM Heart wrenching!! many congrats on your win with this masterful Naani, Rhoma. bfn Lainie

Greg Hoffman July 2, 2014 at 7:54 AM Congrats on your win,nicely done

Arlene Smith July 1, 2014 at 4:09 PM Congrats on a great win, Rhoma! Hugs.. Arlene

Nette Onclaud July 1, 2014 at 3:28 PM i was stunned by the way this piece ended... now this is poetry, rhoma... thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your top win!.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2014 at 3:21 PM I just LOVE this one. What a unique and wonderful way to do the theme. BIG congrats.

Pandita Sietesantos July 1, 2014 at 1:09 PM Hi Rhoma, big congratulations to you on this fabulous TOP win. Warmest regards.

Mohan Chutani July 1, 2014 at 12:26 PM Beautiful top win RHOMA. Mohan

Paul Callus July 1, 2014 at 11:21 AM Ohh! Lovely and touching. Congratulations Rhoma! // paul

Barbara Gorelick July 1, 2014 at 11:07 AM This does SHINE...congrats on your big win. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta July 1, 2014 at 10:19 AM Very pleasing picture you have created in the first stanza, Rhoma. Congrats on a fine win

Len Gasun July 1, 2014 at 9:57 AM This is extremely beautiful my dear friend Rhoma. So love it and enjoyed. Many congratulations on your well-deserved top win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora