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I want you , Do you want me? you held me once tenderly Is it a hopelss situation, let me know and I will try to let go all of these emotions I feel , just infatuation, Seeing you , I ignore the pain pretending everything is the same. are you thinking of her ?, or am i holding on to nothing just tell me something should i even ask or continue wearing a mask. do you, iIwant to know , if you want me? I know I want you.

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Date: 8/31/2011 7:39:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Denise. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 9:16:00 PM
Nice thoughts on feelings of love, denise
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:31:00 AM
the pain of love captured in this emotional write. poetry of the soul.
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Date: 8/30/2011 9:14:00 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning of both seasoned poets and new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Denise. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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