Young Heart

Youth’s innocent allure
Dreams of love so pure
Twilight striving to cure
Longings that endure
First unforgettable amour
Touch of sweet velours



AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:42 AM
This was a beautifully penned monorhyme.
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 9:39 PM
So beautiful and tender, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 10:25 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 7:29 PM
oh how sweet and romantic Line, can't beat love at any age!:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
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