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Young Black Man

The everyday struggle of a young black man Just the thought of being broke Trying to get him to understand If you don't work You don't eat But these young black men in today's generation have their own understandin about this dog eat dog world And what it's like to survive in the streets On the block with the nicks and the dimes Like a 9 to 5 Saying they just trying to make ends meet But when those ends don't meet Than their mindset change And turn to plan B Now they scoping out the next man neighborhood Than head back to the house just to plot a B&E Hoping they don't get caught But when they get caught They sit alone in a cell Looking at their reflection as If they were looking at their own worst enemy But nobody din't get you there but yourself Young Black Man You have to ask if need a little help Young Black Man Now you having dreams Anticipating your freedom in that outside land But when you get outside You head back to the block to the trap house To grab your fie and a pound And head back out on the block Talking bout you putting in overtime Young Black Man So it's no more 9 to 5 Now it's sunrise to sunrise but when will you look over your life And finally realize you could have did something better Now you have a child on the way Do you think they care if you work at mc D's , BK Or sold water off the side of the palmetto Just to get a buck Young Black Man You can be an entrepreneauer Set forth and learn something new bruh Instead of being subjected to the streets And next thing we know we lose ya Now you got your family and friends Heading to the Flea To get that R.I.P. placed upon theor black Tee Forced to think about the old days and loved memories Cause you see "Back in the days I was young and afraid Like I was lost in a maze A creature trapped in a cage And I just wanna be free Be FREE BE FREE!!! So Its time we make a change...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/16/2012 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on the win. Your passion for the topic shows thru.
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Date: 9/15/2012 10:59:00 PM
Channing,, Congratulations in Debbie's " Let's Get Serious " awesome contest. ~ :-) always a pleasure in reading all winners when I get the chance. super xox's from~ PD
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Date: 9/13/2012 3:12:00 AM
Powerful write Channing! The passage of time brings with it more difficult issues to deal with and only those who acknowledge that change is inevitable will survive less scarred. Nice!
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Date: 9/10/2012 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in this contest "Let's Get Serious" Channing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2012 2:17:00 PM
Hello new poet friend, though this is not an ABC form of poetry, the topic was SO well done, I disregarded the incorrect form label. This should be listed as Free Verse [when in doubt always just use Verse as your form] If you need any help just ask, I'd be glad to help. Congrad's on your Serious verse winning. This is an important issue to draw attention too. Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2012 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win Lewis xx
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Date: 9/8/2012 8:32:00 PM
Great poem, I feel your emotion and pain. Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee
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Date: 9/8/2012 5:41:00 PM
Great insight into the troubles of some caught in a trap. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/8/2012 12:09:00 PM
Such pervasive descriptiveness. Good write. Congratulations on winning in the contest with this entry.
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Date: 9/7/2012 5:30:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Channing. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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