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Young Black Man

The everyday struggle of a young black man
Just the thought of being broke
Trying to get him to understand
If you don't work You don't eat
But these young black men in today's generation
have their own understandin about this dog eat dog world
And what it's like to survive in the streets

On the block with the nicks and the dimes
Like a 9 to 5
Saying they just trying to make ends meet
But when those ends don't meet
Than their mindset change 
And turn to plan B
Now they scoping out the next man neighborhood
Than head back to the house just to plot a B&E
Hoping they don't get caught

But when they get caught
They sit alone in a cell
Looking at their reflection
as If they were looking at their own worst enemy
But nobody din't get you there but yourself
Young Black Man
You have to ask if need a little help
Young Black Man
Now you having dreams 
Anticipating your freedom in that outside land

But when you get outside
You head back to the block to the trap house
To grab your fie and a pound 
And head back out on the block
Talking bout you putting in overtime
Young Black Man

So it's no more 9 to 5
Now it's sunrise to sunrise
but when will you look over your life 
And finally realize you could have did something better
Now you have a child on the way
Do you think they care if you work at mc D's , BK
Or sold water off the side of the palmetto
Just to get a buck
Young Black Man

You can be an entrepreneauer
Set forth and learn something new bruh
Instead of being subjected to the streets
And next thing we know we lose ya
Now you got your family and friends
Heading to the Flea
To get that R.I.P. placed upon theor black Tee
Forced to think about the old days and loved memories
Cause you see

"Back in the days 
I was young and afraid
Like I was lost in a maze 
A creature trapped in a cage
And I just wanna be free
Be FREE BE FREE!!!

So Its time we make a change...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/16/2012 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on the win. Your passion for the topic shows thru.
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Date: 9/15/2012 10:59:00 PM
Channing,, Congratulations in Debbie's " Let's Get Serious " awesome contest. ~ :-) always a pleasure in reading all winners when I get the chance. super xox's from~ PD
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Date: 9/13/2012 3:12:00 AM
Powerful write Channing! The passage of time brings with it more difficult issues to deal with and only those who acknowledge that change is inevitable will survive less scarred. Nice!
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Date: 9/10/2012 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in this contest "Let's Get Serious" Channing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2012 2:17:00 PM
Hello new poet friend, though this is not an ABC form of poetry, the topic was SO well done, I disregarded the incorrect form label. This should be listed as Free Verse [when in doubt always just use Verse as your form] If you need any help just ask, I'd be glad to help. Congrad's on your Serious verse winning. This is an important issue to draw attention too. Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2012 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win Lewis xx
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Date: 9/8/2012 8:32:00 PM
Great poem, I feel your emotion and pain. Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee
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Date: 9/8/2012 5:41:00 PM
Great insight into the troubles of some caught in a trap. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/8/2012 12:09:00 PM
Such pervasive descriptiveness. Good write. Congratulations on winning in the contest with this entry.
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Date: 9/7/2012 5:30:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Channing. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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