Young Again

This was sweet. Yes, I wouldn't mind being young again but not today. Take me back to those less technology more imagination days. I'll bet Bill feels the same. The times were harder but there was something special there. God Bless. Vince

Beautifully written Carrie. With each year usually passing quicker than the one before, I have been amazed to find myself living in a year that is almost standing still. Relocating to a new country is like being a child again, with so many things to do and see, so much to learn, so many questions to ask...sorry, my mind was wandering there for a minute! Love, Nigel

lots still young at heart! enjoyed this!!

I love this very thought provoking

very nice and thoughtfuland mind provoking. i'm not there yet and hope to be raptured first. but i still look back sometimes even though i have no one to look back with the youthful thoughts of everyone i was with comes to me some times. john

This is a wonderful piece. I think everyone is still young at heart. Some my call it mind over matters. This is an excellent poem for contemplation. Great job! ~ Joseph

Yup, it's like one day you realize, yikes, I'm actually old! I guess we better get used to it, as it is not going to get any better, physically anyway. I love Brian's comment. Thank goodness for that! Love, Shar

Sigh...who the heck knows, Aging is tough, but really not worth a darn since this bosy is just a house - hard to think of that thoigh, when the face we see is so different! Love Kristin

Happily we don't inside Carrie.Rgds Brian

Live each day like it was your last because before you know it the clock has ticked your life away. Michael

Oh my, Ms. Carrie isn't this the truth !! LOL ... where indeed does time go and the mirror belies what I feel inside!! Takes strength and courage to grow old and thats one more thing they don't teach in school ... smile ... Thanks so much for your enjoyment of my Sky Artistry that I wrote looking out the window last night ... don't know where the words come from sometimes ... thanks for being at the Soup!!

Very nice dreamy poem about being young again! Great flow great write! Thanks for being in my contest! Laura

the simple rhyme scheme belies the cleverness of this lovely eloquent poem. It captures the wistful feeling without sentimentality. I like your work Carrie, very much.

To be young again is so wonderful. I wish I could go back and rewrite my future. Love this write, it brought me back to many years ago.

What a great flow in this! The rhyme is perfect as is the imagery and the subject. Where did time go? Oh my! Michael