You'Ll Soon Show

YOU'LL SOON SHOW

Days are running swift
knowing your presence
is this year's best gift~~
months we asked for you
wishes do come true
prayers answered true
boy or girl: you healthy 
will blow any blues...
Be safe and warm inside me
What's best for you,
the best for me...
You and I, we will grow
Inside ~ you; outside ~ me
but this, I do not mind
so long as you're hearty good
We are all happy! 
few months to go, 
you'll soon show... 
Excited and smiling,
we are looking forward...
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By: Olive ELoisa Guillermo - Fraser
***FREE VERSE; Written April 04, 2018 ~ 10:27am 
***Dedicated to all expectant mothers

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Peter Paul Valletta

Date: 5/5/2020 5:45:00 AM

MATERNITY instinct at it's best. i'm glad all's well seeing other comments below

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2018 7:29:00 PM

and I just got the good news over at the poem of Arthur!! Wow, I am so happy for you two. A Xmas eve baby. Spectacular.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/30/2018 3:02:00 AM

Wonderful, awaiting the baby along with you, Olive:)

Karen Da

Date: 8/21/2018 12:05:00 AM

One of the greatest blessings one could ever receive. And this is a great piece too..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/9/2018 3:28:00 AM

This news is always so amazing! It changes everything, brings a whole world into the family. This poem rises to the occasion. Good luck!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/6/2018 4:23:00 PM

This is the best news that most parents would like to receive, Olive_eloi! It's true that both of you are growing, but don't go eating extra:) Looking forward to the next news...boy or girl!:) Congratulations! Hugs & smiles ~~ paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/7/2018 9:10:00 AM

No am not eating extra :P I'm just eating as normal as I can more on fruits and veggies, not much fizzy drinks.. :D Oh any will do as long as it's healthy! hugs and smiles //Olive_eloi

Lyric Man

Date: 7/4/2018 9:38:00 PM

Olive.. it's good to see your writings. I am back here two. Congrats on your coming child and this tribute to all expectant mothers.. it's precious! Come see me...

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/4/2018 2:40:00 PM

Many congratulations to both of you on becoming parents, it sure is a really nice feeling, brining another human being into the world, I wish you best of luck and again many congratulations to both of you, good luck and have a really nice day

Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2018 11:33:00 AM

oh fabulous news Olive Eloisa and James - will be the first soup baby I know of!!! am so pleased for you both:-) love to you and James:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/7/2018 9:09:00 AM

Thanks much Jan :') hugs and smiles // Olive :)