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You'D Better Not Pout

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I tell you, girl, it’s better not to pout Some tasty treats I have for you in store I'm Santa's helper with a member stout Unlike poor Santa, I can give much more I'm sure in bliss my name you'll scream and shout! For Andrea’s Quintain Christmas Contest Sicilian Quintain contest written in Iambic Pentameter January 2, 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2015 5:41:00 PM

Eileen, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/5/2015 5:49:00 AM

Hi, PD. Thanks for dropping by. I was hoping to do better on this one... :( Oh well....you do what you can. Thanks for congratulating me. Want to join one of yours soon. You've been good to me in contests. Hugs

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/4/2015 5:40:00 PM

Cute one, Eileen !!! Congrats to you, and hope you find no reason to pout this year!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/5/2015 5:51:00 AM

HA HA! Good one, Carrie....I did have a good pout about not doing better on this contest. I'm over it now. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2015 4:09:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Eileen:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/5/2015 5:51:00 AM

Thanks, sweetie. I appreciate it. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/4/2015 3:19:00 PM

Back with the same grin and with congratulations, Eileen! // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/5/2015 5:52:00 AM

Love your grin! I really do! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2015 2:42:00 PM

oh you little devil you. I thought for sure a GUY did this one. hahaha. Congrats for your win.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/5/2015 5:53:00 AM

Was hoping to get you with my attempt at humor and all. Little devil is having a tantrum. Can't seem to please ya! Oh well....This is life. I thought I'd do well cause I used TWO of the themes. :( Take care....

Tim Smith

Date: 1/3/2015 10:45:00 AM

He's bringing you a Merry Christmas..... Lol...hugs Tim

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/3/2015 9:05:00 AM

That's good because poor Santa comes only once a year! This is fun Eileen, good luck in the contest.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2015 9:40:00 AM

I know, but he's got to have what it takes! Gifts come in all shapes and.....sizes! ;) Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2015 7:10:00 AM

- I enjoy this one, dear Eileen ...... I think it is the winning poem, good luck ! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2015 9:41:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine. I hope so. Andrea is a tough sponsor. We'll see how it goes. Hugs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/3/2015 12:26:00 AM

Wow, now I have just one question? How in the world did you figure out I am that Santa's helper? :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2015 9:41:00 AM

I can't divulge that information, Arthur! ;) Hugs

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/2/2015 8:29:00 PM

Naughty girls get the naughty gift...great pairing of rhyme and sexual innuendo Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2015 9:42:00 AM

Justin...I AM naughty, but I'm...OH SO NICE! ;) Hugs, my dear.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2015 3:56:00 PM

Wow! Blimey! Eileen...is that a big grin I see on your face!:) I love it! // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2015 9:43:00 AM

A gin of satisfaction, my dear....I got a nice gift. ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 12:34:00 PM

ha ha ha Eileen love the humour here good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2015 9:44:00 AM

Thanks, dearie. This is important to me. I know Andrea likes humor, and it isn't my forte. I worked hard on this. I hope it gets to see the light of day. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/2/2015 10:04:00 AM

Wild one ....Winners' cirlce choice..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2015 9:44:00 AM

Hi, Sara...thanks for the visit. You somehow always land up on the naughty ones! I thought maybe you'd have a look at my "Talking to Jesus on New Year's Eve" write. I'm not all naughty!!! ;) Hugs