Barbara Gorelick Poet Limerick

You'D Better Not Pout

If no diamonds Ill try not to pout
For that’s not what Christmas is all about
Ill take  Zirconium
Though its a Phonyium
But in the bedroom there could be a drought


Just kidding of course...

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Poet Destroyer A January 4, 2015 at 5:41 PM Barbara,, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~

Carrie Richards January 4, 2015 at 5:37 PM LOL...... !!! I hope for his sake, he wears some long-johns.......it sounds mighty cold, in spite of California's drought!! (And it isn't just from a lack of rain!!) ha !!

Jan Allison January 4, 2015 at 4:09 PM Dropping back with my congrats Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr January 4, 2015 at 3:42 PM lol love it Brenda great write,congratulations on your win

Sandra Haight January 4, 2015 at 3:25 PM Very funny, Barbara! Loved it. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Paul Callus January 4, 2015 at 3:17 PM A 7 for this entertaining Limerick Barbara!! I knew you could not be serious and sparkless! Congratulations on this worthy win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2015 at 2:41 PM What a fun one this was, Barbara. I just loved the punch line!!! Mostly perfect meter and clever use of a made up word with phonyium!! Congrats for your win.

Cecilia Macfarlane December 25, 2014 at 10:08 PM Ha, ha, ha....this is awesome!! Hugs

Jan Allison December 21, 2014 at 5:58 PM made me giggle - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode December 21, 2014 at 9:25 AM Merry Christmas Barbara,please let not there be drought...huggs

Casarah Nance December 21, 2014 at 7:22 AM HAHAHA that is great! :)

Tim Smith December 21, 2014 at 6:35 AM Funny limerick....thanks for the disclaimer.... Hugs Tim

Dr.Ram Mehta December 21, 2014 at 6:15 AM Nice flowing humor, Barb, good luck in the contest