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You'D Better Not Pout

If no diamonds Ill try not to pout For that’s not what Christmas is all about Ill take Zirconium Though its a Phonyium But in the bedroom there could be a drought Just kidding of course...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2015 5:41:00 PM

Barbara,, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/4/2015 5:37:00 PM

LOL...... !!! I hope for his sake, he wears some long-johns.......it sounds mighty cold, in spite of California's drought!! (And it isn't just from a lack of rain!!) ha !!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2015 4:09:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/4/2015 3:42:00 PM

lol love it Brenda great write,congratulations on your win

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/4/2015 3:25:00 PM

Very funny, Barbara! Loved it. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/4/2015 3:17:00 PM

A 7 for this entertaining Limerick Barbara!! I knew you could not be serious and sparkless! Congratulations on this worthy win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2015 2:41:00 PM

What a fun one this was, Barbara. I just loved the punch line!!! Mostly perfect meter and clever use of a made up word with phonyium!! Congrats for your win.