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You writhe and squirm, twist and bend, Agonized for thirst of air. And I’m bound by chains onto the ground, Chained like a slave to a chair. Still you dance on the edge, the open sill, The sill open for a shattered erase. Dressed in beautiful, dressed to kill, An intoxicating purple tipped lace. Are you just an idea, a butterfly notion, Are you more than a theory to lure? Since every night asleep, all I dream is of you, Till you vanish in a puff of obscure.

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Date: 5/29/2017 1:19:00 AM
Most interesting this poem and the picture above it! I was picturing worms from the title and the chair looks that way but actually, the person described in the middle stanza is a beauty! Or is it an idea? A mysterious and intriguing poem. Soupmail.
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Date: 5/29/2017 1:39:00 AM
Thanks Andrea... a great idea .....

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