You Won'T Fool Me Again

I said it before and I’ll say it once more-
   fool me like this I’m slamming the door!

     I thought we had an unyielding connection, 
       but all we shared was perpetual deception. 
        Trickery you played and yet you still stayed
          to prove to me all the damage you made.
             I miss the romance, the fond connection, 
               now it’s misleading guile and imperfection. 
 
               Can you honestly say that you really loved me?
             I think my veiled eyes were too blind to see. 
           I never knew my heart could break like this, 
        we used to be encompassed in love’s bliss.
    I feel like I’m living in a nightmare reality, 
all your artifice and fraud with hypocrisy.

Two-time double-dealing misrepresentation, 
   years full of empty promises and dissimilation. 
      Strategies against me to break my heart in two, 
         in the depths of my heart I thought I knew you.
            Did you ever feel for me a passionate sensation?
               Or was your love just out of temporary obligation?

                 You swore vows of forever, yet you left with ease, 
               oh tell me God, when will this anguish cease!
            I thought I was strong, but you are the weak one,
         all the deceit and lies, you played me for fun. 
       Tonight, after you left I fell to my weary knees, 
     weeping because of your dishonest disease.  

  Although I am still tormented this is the end-
you fooled me once, you won’t fool me again!



Fool Me Once Contest
Rhyme Scheme: A-A-B-B-A-A

Brenda Chiri
August 24, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 9/4/2018 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win with well crafted verse.
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Date: 8/27/2018 12:32:00 PM
All I can say is ouch that hurt.
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