You Were My First

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one after the other all my mistakes i did with you took life for granted i was unseasoned and naïve yes i should have known better but i was young and foolish it’s been a long time coming i should have told you long ago i have regrets and i’m sorry but can’t turn back the hands of time AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on March 28, 2020

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James Inman

Date: 4/2/2020 11:17:00 AM

Regrets are simply a way of saying I have lived and grown.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2020 2:49:00 PM

So true. Thanks, James.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2020 8:25:00 AM

i guess we all learn from our mistakes but it is hard especially when you are young. may I thank you for your current contest I hope I can please you with a cheerful poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2020 8:57:00 AM

Thanks, Jan. We can all use cheerfulness right now. Line xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/28/2020 7:24:00 AM

We all make mistakes, dear. True love should not keep a record of them. Great contemplative write.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2020 9:05:00 AM

Digging deep~ forty years went by in a flash. LOL

Julie Achilles

Date: 3/28/2020 5:25:00 AM

sounds like you were clearing your mind and soul- wonderful Line, keep safe and God Bless you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2020 9:07:00 AM

Recently came across someone from my distant past... stirred some deep rumblings.