You Waited

"you waited" our eyes never met for I journeyed without looking our hearts weren't joined for that door was closed suddenly one fine day with open eyes there you were waiting for me to see the love of what could be it took me long to find your eyes and heart I have no explanation to give or offer you we shared empty hellos never seeing or knowing never truly seeing you were waiting for me such times are behind with loving winds lifeless hellos are now blissfully filled your eyes and heart waited to no ends placing us together with love to build SkyWatcher 05-09-21

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Paul Callus

Date: 5/13/2021 1:27:00 PM

This is a lovely romantic poem, Lisa. It appears that in your case cupid took his time before shooting his arrows. We can say for sure that his aim was perfect :) ~ Regards // paul

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/16/2021 12:16:00 AM

Hello Paul Good Morning. I'm very sorry for the late response. I've been away from the computer. Thank you for such a beautiful commentary and wonderful review. Never do I take words reviews or visits for granted. Yes, cupid and his aim was perfect. Have a wonderful day and keep enjoying poetry soup.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/12/2021 6:12:00 AM

A sweet poem of patience and true love. Well written :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/16/2021 12:13:00 AM

Good Morning Heidi. Thank you very much. I'm very sorry for the late response. I've been away from the computer. I very much appreciate your generous comments. Have a wonderful day and keep enjoying poetry soup.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/9/2021 2:29:00 PM

Dear friend, love has a way of waiting forever when it is true. I can feel the emotions penned here. I hope it had a happy ending :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2021 3:26:00 AM

Good Morning Mystic Rose - Hi. How true your words are. Thank you and yes it had a happy ending. Thank you also for letting me know the emotive factor came through. Have a wonderful day and keep enjoying poetry soup.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/9/2021 11:51:00 AM

Hello Lisa Ricci, this is so romantic. Wishing you a Happy Mother's Day. hugs Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/10/2021 10:32:00 AM

Hello Lisa Ricci, I hope you had a good Mother's Day celebration. Yo u are welcome my friend.Yjank you. I do enjoy Poetry soup. Enjoy your day my friend.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2021 3:25:00 AM

Good Morning Darlene - Thank you very much. I appreciate your generous words and thoughts. Happy Mother's Day to you also. Have a wonderful day and keep enjoying poetry soup.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/9/2021 6:13:00 AM

Lisa, so romantic, so optimistic. So lovely to read again and again. Blessings

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/9/2021 7:55:00 AM

Wow Victor - I'm thrilled you liked it. Coming from you your thoughts and commentary mean much. Truly. Have a wonderful day and I will return to your page very soon. Remain safe.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/9/2021 5:57:00 AM

so beautiful and romantic, its lovely to see your lovely poems again Lisa:-) hugs Jan xx

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/9/2021 7:53:00 AM

Good Morning Jan - Thank you Thank you. I'm honored - truly. Never to I take your visits or comments for granted Jan. I can't today but I will see you on your page within the next day or so. Have a beautiful day

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/9/2021 5:23:00 AM

Love always finds you in the end Lisa. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/9/2021 5:55:00 AM

Hello Tom - Thank you very much and I like your thoughts of love finding you in the end because may all know of love. Have a wonderful day and keep enjoying poetry and poetry soup as well.