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You Vixen, You

Lips Aflame Hot whispers Carry lustsparks Born of burning thoughts That weave a searing spell Binding my dark dreams to you, In whom I live to be fulfilled: Draw me close on hot red sparks of love, Enfold me in the secrets of yourself.

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Date: 11/27/2009 6:50:00 PM
I loved this entire poem! I thought it was brilliant; but, I definitely loved the last line of your etheree. This is a perfect piece and congratulations on getting it featured. It's very deserving.
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Date: 11/25/2009 10:21:00 AM
Congats on this feature....Well done.....:JP]
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Date: 11/25/2009 9:52:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem William. Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/23/2009 5:13:00 PM
Interesting Etheree, William. Congrats. Iolanda
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Date: 11/23/2009 3:37:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Willian! A lovely read. Happy Thanksgiving too! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/23/2009 2:09:00 PM
Sublime write, William! It's going into my favorites! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/23/2009 11:13:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poetry being shared with us this week >> James
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Bill. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 6:29:00 AM
Very descriptive and passionate write in a few short lines in the featured poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/23/2009 2:53:00 AM
Excellent write and well deserving selection for being featured this week. Best wishes and keep writing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 11/22/2009 6:15:00 PM
Good use of this challenging form for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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