William Masonis Poet Etheree

You Vixen, You

Lips
Aflame
Hot whispers
Carry lustsparks
Born of burning thoughts
That weave a searing spell
Binding my dark dreams to you,
In whom I live to be fulfilled:
Draw me close on hot red sparks of love,
Enfold me in the secrets of yourself.

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Brandee Augustus November 27, 2009 at 6:50 PM I loved this entire poem! I thought it was brilliant; but, I definitely loved the last line of your etheree. This is a perfect piece and congratulations on getting it featured. It's very deserving.

Jared Pickett November 25, 2009 at 10:21 AM Congats on this feature....Well done.....:JP]

Janette Fisher November 25, 2009 at 9:52 AM Many congrats on your featured poem William. Rgds Janette

Iolanda Scripca November 23, 2009 at 5:13 PM Interesting Etheree, William. Congrats. Iolanda

P Sheart November 23, 2009 at 3:37 PM Congrats on your feature poem this week Willian! A lovely read. Happy Thanksgiving too! Love Light Patty

Donna Golden November 23, 2009 at 2:09 PM Sublime write, William! It's going into my favorites! Hugs, Donna

James Fraser November 23, 2009 at 11:13 AM Many congratulations on your poetry being shared with us this week >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown November 23, 2009 at 8:28 AM Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Bill. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick November 23, 2009 at 6:29 AM Very descriptive and passionate write in a few short lines in the featured poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Anthony Nutter November 23, 2009 at 2:53 AM Excellent write and well deserving selection for being featured this week. Best wishes and keep writing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

November 22, 2009 at 6:15 PM Good use of this challenging form for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen