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You Turn Me On Every Day

You hold out your hand and reach for me I am the one thing you desire You cannot wait to turn me on Guess you know the right buttons to press I start to get all hot and steamy I am the one to quench your thirst… Where would we be without our kettle? Jan Allison 21st August 2014

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/1/2016 10:34:00 AM

Wanna see my kettle? :) So funny this one!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2016 11:29:00 AM

Just one question ... does it have a long spout hee hee:-) hugs jan xx

James Mwangi

Date: 9/18/2014 9:54:00 AM

haha...i like this one

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 10:01:00 AM

Thanks James it was my first attempt at personification:-) Hugs Jan xx

Yasmin Artisticbutterfly33 Fekri

Date: 8/23/2014 5:42:00 PM

hahaha so funny

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2014 5:45:00 PM

This was my first attempt at a personification poem and i was really pleased with the result LoL. Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/21/2014 3:47:00 PM

:) clever sweetie. steamy! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 3:51:00 PM

LOL Casarah:-) Happy muse back today:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/21/2014 11:02:00 AM

Clever write Jan ! U go girl !! Loved much!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 11:53:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) I had fun with this write:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/21/2014 9:45:00 AM

Hmmm.....you know where my mind was :)... Great Personification......hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2014 10:18:00 AM

Yeah :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 10:00:00 AM

LOL Tim - I am certain you were thinking of a kettle of course! I do like to try and grab people's attention with my title and I promised happy muse was going to be back today :-) :-) :-) Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/21/2014 9:32:00 AM

What kettle? You've been cooking too long. It's gonna boil over haha. Enjoyed

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 9:37:00 AM

LOL thanks for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 8/21/2014 9:32:00 AM

Hi Jan, That was too cute. Very nice. Have a great day. Take care. Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 9:36:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/21/2014 9:25:00 AM

OH Me OH MY! GIRL....You got it going ON! ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 9:35:00 AM

Hope it inspires YOU to write something hot and steamy LOL - love your sensual writes - i am better at humour than sensuality ... but at least I have my happy muse back:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 9:24:00 AM

Nice personification with soothing humor, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 9:34:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Dr Mehta:-) Hugs jan xxx

J. R. Corbin

Date: 8/21/2014 9:21:00 AM

When I was a kid, my mother and grandmother used a contraption called a pressure cooker. Don't know if they still make those, but they were used to seal canning goods for the winter. One day, the pressure got so great, it blew the lid off, and shot it through the ceiling. That's what this poem just did to me. ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 9:33:00 AM

WOW thank you JR - got my happy muse back so I thought I would have a bit of fun:-) My mum used to have a pressure cooker - used to scare the living daylights out of me - but she made nice stew in it I remember - not seen one for years i guess the microwave has taken over:-) Hugs Jan xxx