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You Should've Stayed

Don’t let guilt
be the thing that drives you
away from sanity.

Eventually, everything
you feel
will be set free.

Honestly, I never thought
I’d care so much
that you’re gone—
but I miss you.
And now I know I was wrong.

Why did God have to take you away?
Couldn’t He see
you were still needed here?

Mom needs you.
So do your kids.
Dad pretends not to care—
but inside,
the feelings still exist.

Why did you leave?
You should’ve fought harder
to stay alive.

We miss you
as the days go by.
I see your face
every time I close my eyes…
but it’s not the same
without you here.

With you gone,
the days
just fade
away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2012 7:04:00 AM
Imsorry for your loss. Very nice dedication.Ioften write about love and loss. Its hard to write about death and loss so I appreciate the creativity that comes from that sorrow and pain. Nice job
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Sarah Moncada
Date: 3/3/2012 12:15:00 PM
I also write about love and loss but since my brothers death and my cousins as well, death and loss have been my inpiration. Thank you
Date: 2/3/2012 10:42:00 AM
Sad and lovely poem Saah. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Sarah Moncada
Date: 2/3/2012 10:43:00 AM
thank you.

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