You Shall See

I sit with crooked knees, bent like the browning blades of grass trampled by turtles and picked apart by doves My moans aren't moans of joy but parables spewed at sunlight burning crosses that bare my way but they are undesirable as so am I I watch in filth as hustlers walk away sevens and elevens bound to come today Homeless I am not but hopeless fills my day I am the daughter of lillies and the son of wilted spirits Drink in my cup as blood bleeds in your pain the moon will rise again and you shall see
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Date: 9/20/2018 1:15:00 PM
Hello Tim, I like the way you paint the picture with your words in this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/21/2018 10:29:00 PM
Hmm, is this a dream? Perhaps. Either way, your thoughts hold many emotions- many thoughts to ponder indeed. ~ Brandy
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Date: 8/21/2018 8:50:00 PM
"Truth isn't Truth" This is a beautiful poem Tim and I really liked the lines "but parables spewed at sunlight burning crosses that bare my way"
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Date: 8/20/2018 4:47:00 PM
I made a special trip to Tim Town today and am so glad I did! True poetry, matey!
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Date: 8/19/2018 4:45:00 PM
wow! very beautifully written, tim, but also very sad. i'm glad to hear it was only twinkie-inspired...
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Date: 8/19/2018 12:20:00 PM
dracula sips dandelion wine "till the moon will rise again"
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Date: 8/19/2018 10:47:00 AM
I don't fully understand this, Tim, but these lines mean something personal to me. "I am the daughter of lillies and the son of wilted spirits." Beautiful writing. A fav.
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Date: 8/19/2018 9:30:00 AM
This one is powerful Tim :) Well done!
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Date: 8/19/2018 9:09:00 AM
Woah. A little emotional trip this. xomo
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Date: 8/19/2018 9:23:00 AM
Lol! I totally get that ;p
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/19/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thanks momo this one came out of left field. No more Twinkies after midnight...lol
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