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You Open Your Eyes

You open your eyes And there is bright sunshine A new day on the horizon Another chance to keep everything in line Go forward and prosper Look towards tackling the day Let the rhythm move you And guide yourself in every way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/5/2018 2:37:00 PM
Beautiful free verse Brooklyn Six Project!! Very positive.. Would make awesome lyrics to a song!!
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Date: 5/5/2018 1:19:00 PM
Hello Brooklyn Six Project, I like the message your poem reads. Have a nice dy my friend.
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