You Open Your Eyes

You open your eyes 
And there is bright sunshine 
A new day on the horizon 
Another chance to keep everything in line 
Go forward and prosper
Look towards tackling the day 
Let the rhythm move you 
And guide yourself in every way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May 5, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Beautiful free verse Brooklyn Six Project!! Very positive.. Would make awesome lyrics to a song!!
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May 5, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Hello Brooklyn Six Project, I like the message your poem reads. Have a nice dy my friend.
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