You Need Hands - Limerick Contest

There is a young man called Alan Sprocket Always has both hands in his pocket Said it keeps him calm and warm So why is he a twitching form As though his fingers were in a socket
Penned 25April 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Yvonne Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations on your win Seren!
Nance Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 5:47 PM
Hmm I could guess..... LOl. nice win
Roberts Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 10:46 PM
Well they sure were not beating a retreat...lol..Seren
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 11:35 PM
good win, Seren. Glad to see this one of yours. Luv, andrea
Roberts Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Tried to be funny and a. Bit bawdy......Seren
Roper Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Hahaha.... Funny! Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7:~)
Roberts Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Thank you..... Seren
A  Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 5:21 PM
SEREN, Congratulations...... SKAT LOVE
A   Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 4:59 PM
Seren, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA
Roberts Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Thank you... Seren
Allison Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Very clever limerick Seren made me giggle - congrats on your 3rd place in my first contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 10:45 PM
Thank you Jan, was fun writing it...Seren
Yvonne Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 10:52 PM
A bit cocky but I like it. You love writing lime rickys and it shows. Very funny, very good. A Fav!
Roberts Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 10:46 PM
They say let your fingers do the work......Seren
Nunez Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 1:26 PM
lol! He's wired! :) :)
Das Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 12:37 AM
Funny...lol
Vaso Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 10:48 PM
LOL I am not telling!!!!!
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