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You May Have Taken a Fall

You nay have taken a fall But, you can rise again Never ever lose hope You can enlighten your world my friend There will be bumps in the road Do not let them deter you Rise above those potential dangers And guise your way through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/30/2018 8:25:00 AM
We all take falls,but we should never give up. Because over the hill the sun will surely shine.
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The Brooklyn Six Project
Date: 7/30/2018 2:56:00 PM
Much appreciated Thomas
Date: 7/29/2018 10:50:00 PM
Optimistic! Hopeful! Well done! I want to see more of your poetry, TBSP.
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The Brooklyn Six Project
Date: 7/29/2018 11:01:00 PM
Much appreciated Caren. Please read more of my poetry.

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