You Light Up My Life

suns candlepowers
can surley lighten up some
darken passages



Tribute To Nature
And The Power Of The Sun


Also Entry For
Raul Moreno's
Ascension Haiku Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 23, 2009 at 4:36 PM
What a creative view! Love the first line. Good luck in the contest. You said you have to work Thanksgiving--what do you do? After years of working holidays, I am grateful for my current position of day shifts and no weekends etc. Hope you will still have some time to celebrate Thanksgiving too. Karen
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November 20, 2009 at 7:29 PM
Wonderful Haiku, Katherine. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Wishin you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. Love, Lainie
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November 19, 2009 at 4:38 PM
Nicely done Haiku that is sure to be a winner. Keep writing. Sara
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November 19, 2009 at 2:19 PM
Lovely Haiku Katherine >> James
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November 19, 2009 at 12:27 PM
Hey Katherine - you always light up everyone's life! A beautifully written haiku. You, Katherine, are a class act! Wishing you and your family a Happy & healthy Thanksgiving. BIG hugs, Johnny
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November 19, 2009 at 11:18 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Katherine. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. I am wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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November 19, 2009 at 9:22 AM
Excellent Haiku. Good luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl
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November 19, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Tributary!scented!
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