You Knew

You walked in; my heart quivered. A blush came over my face. I contained my emotion. You knew, anyway. © December 14, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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James Peranteau

Date: 1/15/2011 5:37:00 AM

Plain to veiw the crush in this dear poet ! Great lil' write Dane Ann ! I've been reading many of the poets who have been using this form lately, I like the form for sure ! much love, james

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/14/2011 11:43:00 PM

ohhhh, i got the subtle punch in the end, dane-ann... a knockout in the contest!! whew... love this! :) nette

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/14/2011 8:48:00 PM

really beautiful! Dane Ann! jmg

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 8:43:00 PM

Dane Ann, I think this one is very nice. HOpe to see it on the winners list! Love what you portray with it. Luv, Andrea

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/14/2011 8:16:00 PM

Looks like a good dodoitsu from here.