You Knew

You walked in; my heart quivered.
A blush came over my face.
I contained my emotion.
You knew, anyway.

© December 14, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Peranteau Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 5:37 AM
Plain to veiw the crush in this dear poet ! Great lil' write Dane Ann ! I've been reading many of the poets who have been using this form lately, I like the form for sure ! much love, james
Onclaud Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 11:43 PM
ohhhh, i got the subtle punch in the end, dane-ann... a knockout in the contest!! whew... love this! :) nette
Goff Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 8:48 PM
really beautiful! Dane Ann! jmg
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 8:43 PM
Dane Ann, I think this one is very nice. HOpe to see it on the winners list! Love what you portray with it. Luv, Andrea
Pettit Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 8:16 PM
Looks like a good dodoitsu from here.
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