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You Inspire

I cannot help but smile at the very thought of you You create an image of loveliness that so inspires For deep within this man rages a fire burning true The very thought of you releases new desires You create an image of loveliness that so inspires Your face of beauty gives my mind words to write The very thought of you releases new desires As poetic fires burn from the flames you so ignite Your face of beauty gives my mind words to write So all come together then, neatly and with flow As poetic fires burn from the flames you so ignite Your beauty gives my poems light, eternal glow So all come together then, neatly and with flow For deep within this man rages a fire burning true Your beauty gives my poems light, eternal glow I cannot help but smile at the very thought of you

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Date: 2/14/2009 10:59:00 AM
Micheal, this is totally awesome! I don't believe I've ever seen the very cool form before (I am a novice but I am learning). I I love the sentiment in this as well and how it developes. To my favs! I am going to study up on this form. Thank you for sharing this gem! Happy Valentines Day! By the way, I am in awe about the amount of work that you have posted. Wow! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/9/2009 12:49:00 PM
Very impressive pantoum, a most beautiful write. This is an absolute great write.
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