Premiere Contest WinnerYou Have the Gift

Forever young, bubbly and happy
You found that secret formula
Working your charm for tips
In the best of upscale resto-bars
Where clients indulge in micro vacations

Longing to pamper themselves
You never fail to enhance their experience
With your generous luxurious smile
And that natural glitter in your eyes

You make them feel like
The outside world no longer exists
There’s no hiding or denying
Your exotic trips have tinted your charisma

Your long lavish hair complements your youthful heart
You’ll never give in and get old
Voracious traveller and lover of life
There’s no job you’d rather do
Than greet this classy crowd

You have the party hostess flair
The gift of reaching in for the pearl
And getting the best of people

With your charm it’s the challenge you love
No one walks away forgetting your smile
Untouched by your contagious love for life
It lingers with them like an intoxicating perfume



Read on air by invitation  ~  May 1, 2022  'POETS HARBOUR'

AP: 1st place 2020, Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on April 16, 2018 for contest NEW POEMS ONLY 2 sponsored by EMILE PINET  -  RANKED 1ST
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Otieng Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations Line. This is such a lovely write.
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Thank you so much, Samuel. Most appreciated.
Haight Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 11:08 AM
Line, congratulations on your First Place Trophy win for this outstanding poem about your outstanding friend. So beautifully expressed in your well-written poem! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 11:26 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Donnelly Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 9:20 AM
I'm delighted to see your poem won, Line; am returning to say, Congrats! All the best and God bless. :) ~ Artsie
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 11:27 PM
Thank you so much, Artsieladie. Most appreciated.
Rose  Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 8:58 AM
It sounds like you have found the magical perfume of true friendship. How fortunate you are, So many walk this earth without true friendship, Thank you for sharing your winning poetry Congrats
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 11:30 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Pixie. I totally agree with you but I think we lucked out on finding the PS community.
Cunningham Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 2:16 AM
You certainly have the gift Line. Congratulations. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:54 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Tom.
Gonzales Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 11:57 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win Line! A great heart-warming tribute. Truly, you have the gift. Best regards :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 12:07 AM
Thank you so much, Elaine. What a lovely thing to say.
Canerdy Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 10:05 PM
Excellent, Line. CONGRATS!! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Thank you, Janice. Much appreciated.
Gentry Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Congratulations Line #1 win with this awesome tribute to your friend, Diane!! So proud of you. Your description of her is such that we all want to meet her. She definitely has a good friend in you! :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Thanks you so much, Susan. We can rent a tour bus and all go to Montreal.
Pinet Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Congratulations Line! Your amazing poem has placed First in my contest. Very well done my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:21 PM
I am in shock and very appreciative. Thank you so much, Emile. Most appreciated.
Donnelly Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:37 PM
It always warms my heart when I read a tribute to another. Seeing & appreciating the value in others we need more of, I think, as opposed to the opposite, which there's too much of. You've written a wonderful tribute here to your friend & it speaks volumes for you as well my friend. God bless. :) ~ Artsie
Gauthier Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 10:13 PM
Thank you so much, Artsieladie, for your delightful and most appreciated visit.
Richards Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 7:44 PM
She will light up with joy to read your wonderful and generous words. What a lovely tribute this is to your friend :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Thank you so much, Carrie. Much appreciated.
Gentile Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Such a nice tribute, Line. I have know folks with that gift. They are fun to be around for sure , Happy Wednesday xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Mike. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 6:16 AM
I wish someone liked me well enough to write this kind of wonderful!!!!
Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 10:09 AM
O Caren, you would be surprised. With all the lives you've impacted, I bet there are a lot more poems than you will ever know in the heart of each and every person you've helped. The ironic thing is they usually think that of course you already know.
Kriticos Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Absolutely beautiful extremely well wrought, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Thank you so much, Kyle, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Michael Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 6:44 AM
Who's that...certainly a rare gem...Lovely dedication...
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:29 AM
She lives in Montreal and recently single !
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:46 AM
wow, what a great description of a congenial woman, Line. I need to check this contest out to see exactly what he is asking for. You really painted her personality for us to picture her.(how old is she really??)
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:58 AM
I think she is 55. She was a wonderful friend, we've recently reconnected.
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