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You Have Broken My Heart (Originally a Song)

You said you would forever love me And that it was always meant to be You said you would forever be here As the days fade you just disappear You have broken my heart You have torn me apart You have broken my heart And everyday I fall apart I fall to pieces I fall to pieces you have broken my heart You said to me you would never lie Now I can't help but wonder why You said to me you would never leave Now I can not even believe You have broken my heart You have torn me apart You have broken my heart And everyday I fall apart I fall to pieces I fall to pieces you have broken my heart You said you would never turn away And now I look back on that first day You said you would never let me down And now I lay crumpled on the ground You have broken my heart You have torn me apart You have broken my heart And everyday I fall apart I fall to pieces I fall to pieces you have broken my heart

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Jay Loveless

Date: 3/3/2010 11:01:00 AM

This is beautiful. I absolutly adore it, it brings tears to my eyes, and tears at my heart and soul. Its filled with emotion, and hurt, and my favorite by you thus far. beautiful really. always, Rain Essesnce.

Constance La France

Date: 11/9/2009 6:09:00 PM

Jamie, this poem I think is your best. It is exceptional, filled with emotion, beautifully written. Now, you asked me about the use of brackets in my writing, did you not hear the echo(the vibration)the shadow of a thought. This is a style used by the great poet E.E Cummings which I love. I use it often in my writing

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/5/2009 11:13:00 AM

Wonderful writing Jamie it was a joy to read thank you. I wish you a fun filled inspiring day. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2009 10:52:00 AM

Interesting sad write. Keep writing. Sara

Courtney Hallett

Date: 11/4/2009 11:19:00 AM

Really good. Sounds interesting. I like it.