You Gave Me No Kiss - Based On Luke 7

Simon:

Who is that woman, what's she doing here?
Before that man kneeling, spreading her hair
Weeping and sobbing, why doesn't he see
What kind of woman she has to be
Oh the disorder, such a commotion
Spoiling our meal with excessive emotion.

Jesus:

Listen to me I've got something to say
How did you treat me when I came today?
No welcome, no washing for my dusty feet
Offensively silent you chose how to greet
Do you see this woman? I don't think you do
A much loving sinner, forgiven, but you -

You gave me no kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/9/2021 11:11:00 AM
Back on here again not been on for a while alot going on much before all this world crisis hope you well read your poem again nice poem davidscottxx
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Date: 1/31/2016 7:30:00 PM
Barney, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 9/26/2014 11:27:00 AM
HI MATE SORRY MISSED YOU OTHER DAY HOFULY SEE YOU TUSEDAY31 HOPE YOU WELL LOVE THIS POEM HAD TO READ AGAIN FROM DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 9/18/2014 12:45:00 PM
nice write like the verse alot cant see to soup mail you sorry was not in last week i will try to attend tomorrow being the 19/9/14 for forms descusion ect take care mate davidscott
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Date: 8/25/2014 2:57:00 PM
very well written i enjoyed this clever write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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