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You, Eve and I

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R-ecline your wearied self within my care O-n a coverlet of eventide and moon M-elted stars, in platinum tresses, rare A-light your eyes and aspect, as I swoon N-ight is but another of your lovers T-aken as I am, with all your charms I-n, you slip, between its silky covers C-loistered in its ardor ... and my arms. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Romantic - Acrostic" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Sponsor. ~ 4th Place ~ in the "Word Play" Poetry Contest, Bobby May, Judge & Sponsor. * What I love the most ... romance! *

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Jean Murray

Date: 2/7/2019 12:57:00 PM

You are just so sexy Greg!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2019 2:54:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in Acrostic Word Play Contest, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/6/2019 4:19:00 PM

dropping back again with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 2/22/2018 5:12:00 AM

Many congrats Greg i love your unique take on the theme:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2018 5:51:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Jan, you are always so kind to me! Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3

Eve Roper

Date: 2/21/2018 1:07:00 AM

Elegant verse, Greg, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/21/2018 11:42:00 PM

Many kind thank you's, Eve ... blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 2/19/2018 3:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win, Greg.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2018 3:37:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal.

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 2/18/2018 10:13:00 PM

Your carefully selected words arranged in simple perfect form, rhyme and meter have made this a jewel of romantic poetry.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2018 2:59:00 AM

That's very kind of you, Geoffrey, I'm so pleased you liked it! I worked very hard on this one to make it fluid and rhyming, yet do so with imagery and substance around the Acrostic. I'm very proud of this one. Blessings and thanks, my friend! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2018 7:19:00 PM

Wow, this is outstanding work, Greg, as always. BIG congrats too.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2018 2:57:00 AM

I'm pleased you like it, Andrea ... thank you so much! :-) <3

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/18/2018 6:21:00 PM

Back for congrats!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2018 2:57:00 AM

Blessings and thanks to you, Kim! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2018 2:02:00 PM

Back with wonderful congrats. I saw your ménage-à-trois comment below. LOL

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2018 2:56:00 AM

LOL - Thank you so much, Line, thought you might get a chuckle, friend! ;-)

Edward Mccall

Date: 2/18/2018 1:36:00 PM

What a wonderfully penned acrostic Greg, definitely a winner good luck in the contest.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2018 2:55:00 AM

Very kind of you, Edward, thanks so much! :-)

John Hamilton

Date: 2/18/2018 1:26:00 PM

Another gorgeous write Greg, definitely one on your best, at first I thought it was 3 persons, then I figured out who Eve was, so clever, your use of words has a special phraseology that few can acheive, hence a nice shared 2nd place, congrats buddy!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2018 2:53:00 AM

Thank you so very much, John, I greatly appreciate your kind words and the shared placement, on a list with such amazing poets. Glad you enjoyed this one!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/18/2018 5:14:00 AM

I’m finding this contest a difficult task! Great, Greg! I so admire your work!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/18/2018 10:16:00 AM

You're very sweet, Kim, and I thank you so much! (Where do I send the roses? ;-) ) <3

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/18/2018 12:18:00 AM

Brilliantly romantic ... Enjoyed the acrostic ...

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/18/2018 10:15:00 AM

Thank you SO much, Probir - many thanks my friend! :-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/17/2018 10:26:00 PM

Usually three's a crowd but this poem is a wonderful exception. Well done, Gregory.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/18/2018 10:15:00 AM

Thank you so much, Line - I'm happy you liked my petit ménage à trois! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3