You Can Get Some Satisfaction

      madness is 
         thinking of
      e-v-e-r-y-t-h-i-n-g
         you think 
      you’ll accomplish
         today 

     satisfaction comes
         before 
          thought
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 4:17 PM
I had to chuckle as I finished this poem. I seem to always want to accomplish more than I feasibly can...doing so creates frustration....you're right..satisfaction comes before my contemplation :-) wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 6:06 AM
LOL! I don’t meditate at what I didn’t get done (anymore) but rather take into account those things I did get done…satisfaction, sweet poet!
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 1:59 AM
Sometimes instead of a 'to-do' list I find much more joy in a 'got-done' list, makes me feel much more accomplished than the to-dos!
Baker Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 9:47 PM
In the dictionary maybe. Thinking can have a downside, on that I can agree. Have a pleasant weekend, Gershon. Bill
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