You came

You came
When my life is a cloud of darkness void of light
I feel so dull but you came with an energy so bright
Your frequent smiles fly me to a world unknown
Where we hold hands to feel a spark tone 
My songs have never known

You heated my cold heart with your beauty 
A wonder you made with little winkles
I fell terribly to the pit of affection that twinkles
I am a soul, not the stone I was before
My heart race to the core
That I can't control nor stop, yet I still long for more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Agustin Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 2:54 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Bartley Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 2:46 PM
Me too. I love winkles and twinkles rhyme! Thanks for sharing!
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