Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

You Broke My Heart-'Hibernal Heart'

Hibernal Heart

Yes youthful yesterday a kindred King and Queen
Till today a dust full death within a daunting dream
Oh sweet tomorrow awake before the rising sun
For tonight my heart hinders, alas I have no one

My passion remains passive and your poison permeates
As your lingering lucifugous love shuts the guilted gates
I've not any decorative diamonds nor ranting relishing rings
All I have left is a lamenting love that sadly silently sings.



02.06.2017
You Broke My Heart ... Contest
Sponsored by...Nicola Byrne

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Deborah Burch February 14, 2017 at 8:12 PM Well done WW!! Congratulations!!!:) Hugggs deb!!

Charlie Smith February 14, 2017 at 11:02 AM Back to congratulate you WW, I am a boy and very young at heart...

Kim Rodrigues February 14, 2017 at 5:28 AM Very nice wordsmithing! Congrats on your top win, WW!

Kai Michael Neumann February 14, 2017 at 1:58 AM Congratulation. Heartfelt, broken and open to change. Kai

Agnes Krampe February 13, 2017 at 5:28 PM Love the alliterations (and learned a new word!). Congrats on your win.

Phillip Garcia February 13, 2017 at 4:48 PM Straight up awesome. I LOVE your use of alliteration. It was smooth and very effective

Janis Medders Tobechi February 13, 2017 at 3:42 PM I love this. Great write. Congrats.

Nette Onclaud February 7, 2017 at 10:23 PM heartrending write poignantly scribed...and with alliteration to enhance the appeal of your lines, WW... all the best at nicola's, WW..huggs Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 10:27 PM Thank you so much nette...such a beautiful comment my friend...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong February 7, 2017 at 8:01 PM Wow this poem is stunningly beautiful WW! I am pretty sure Nicola will just love it. I sure do! 7 ; ) Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 10:03 PM Thank you so much Connie...I miss your visits...sometimes it's hard to keep in touch with everyone...god bless...^WW^

Daniel Turner February 7, 2017 at 5:32 PM Well done, Wingman. Nothing wrong with singing the blues:) It's the story of my life! Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 6:26 PM Dido...old buddy...never gets any better...but then again who would write about it lol...we need poets to handle the heavy duty parts of life lol...god bless my friend...^WW^

Sunlite Wanter February 7, 2017 at 5:18 PM You really write beautifully! Thank you for commenting on my poem. Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 6:20 PM Thank you SW...and you are a beautiful soul...god bless...^WW^

Becca Teagan February 7, 2017 at 1:32 PM I love all the alliteration, WW, this flows nicely this sad poem. Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 1:45 PM Thank you my lovely friend...god bless...^WW^

Akkina Downing February 7, 2017 at 1:05 PM Don't trip over one that has no appreciation for love... Good luck and all the best :) Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 1:11 PM Thank you Akkina...love your name by the way...unfortunately, I'm always tripping lol...god bless..^WW^

John Hamilton February 7, 2017 at 12:33 PM Great rhymes as always WW, really enjoyed this, if for the contest should do well! I think Nicola will like your L word!lol John Hamilton February 7, 2017 at 2:09 PM 57ish 4for 4? John Hamilton February 7, 2017 at 2:07 PM No I was a courier though so half points? Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 12:55 PM Now how did that happen...Thank you John...I'm a boy too...and my name is also John...2 for 2...did you drive a mail truck by any chance...and we'll make for 3 lol...god bless...^WW^ John Hamilton February 7, 2017 at 12:50 PM think your comment jumped and i am a boy.lol Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 12:38 PM I did take her home to mama...and mama wanted to throw! her out...I've should have listed to mama lol...thanks eh...god bless Charlie old boy(your probably very young and I'm calling you an old boy)...I hope you don't mind...and are you a boy? lol...^WW^

Charlie Smith February 7, 2017 at 11:50 AM A cold hearted cave dweller eh? Doesn't sound like one to take home to mama. Great rhyme W/W, best wishes in the contest... Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 12:51 PM I did take her home to mama...and mama wanted to throw! her out...I've should have listed to mama lol...thanks eh...god bless Charlie old boy(your probably very young and I'm calling you an old boy)...I hope you don't mind...and are you a boy? lol...^WW^

Probir Gupta February 7, 2017 at 8:28 AM So sad, but still nice ... GL ... Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 12:50 PM Thank you Probir my friend...nice to see and hear from you again...you know what I mean lol...god bless...^WW^

Joanna Daniel February 7, 2017 at 7:45 AM Sounds so sad, WW:( I like that last line, it's very nice:) a 7:) Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 12:49 PM Thank you Jo...a pleasure my friend to have you visit...god bless...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues February 7, 2017 at 6:58 AM Very nice! Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 12:47 PM Thank you Kim...your lovely smile is felt even here...god bless...^WW^

Chris Green February 7, 2017 at 5:42 AM Definitely a winner here. This was deep and filled with the sadness that comes with a broken heart Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 12:46 PM Thank you Chris...always a pleasure to have you visit my friend...with your beautiful kind words...god bless...^WW^

White Wolf February 7, 2017 at 12:53 AM A very heartfelt poem here WW! It shall do well in the contest! GL Winged Warrior February 7, 2017 at 12:45 PM Thank you Whitey...you are an ambassador from heaven, my friend...I can sense it...I bow...god bless...^WW^