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You Bring Smiles

Little one, heaven's blessings follow you Each day more happiness and love you bring A new expression or word bestows smiles You need but clap your hands to spread the smiles In a crowded room all eyes are on you Few can resist the joy your giggles bring But that will change, for growth the years will bring Look around, try to remember these smiles The center of attention now is you Revel in this moment when you bring smiles *Tritina written July 19, 2014 for Craig's contest (I cannot return comments at this time)

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Date: 8/4/2014 4:33:00 PM
Grats on your win sweetie, hope you are well :) hugs :)
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:54:00 AM
This brought me a smile, congratulations.
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:08:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats on this very lovely write Carolyn my dear friend!
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Date: 8/2/2014 11:31:00 PM
Huge congrats on your great win my friend!
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Date: 8/2/2014 8:46:00 PM
Carolyn, I really like yours. I am seeing so many great entries on this list. congrats.
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:47:00 PM
Nicely done LNC....Im smiling now...congrats. G
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Date: 8/2/2014 12:58:00 PM
So, so true, Carolyn. And they get used to our rapt attention and find it so hard when they are not the center of it as they once were. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/22/2014 11:51:00 PM
This gem shines ever so brightly my talented friend!! Innocence has it's own beauty that fades after maturity steals it away. Another great write and good luck in the contest my friend!!!!!!
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Date: 7/19/2014 1:53:00 PM
Lovely expressive write Carolyn,, babies r like centre of gravity,, pulling everyone towards them ,, bringing smiles,, soft subtle,, luck in contest!
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Date: 7/19/2014 1:05:00 PM
Babies are always the center of attraction and they do manage to elicit many smiles. Enjoyed your take on this theme; gl in the contest. Peace and love. // paul
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Date: 8/2/2014 3:31:00 PM
...and back again Carolyn...with congrats on a lovely win! // paul
Date: 7/19/2014 12:34:00 PM
Hello, very cute and joyful poem! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/19/2014 11:35:00 AM
You lit up my day with this little gem Carolyn...so many memories of my little ones when they were babies.....hugs Tim
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Date: 7/19/2014 11:29:00 AM
Charming write Carolyn - it sure made me smile:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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