You are you-Who am I

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We all have our own lives, we should sometimes worry about the next foot steps we are taking and worry about our own lives and not how someone else should live theirs. Yes, there are exceptions. But for the most part- Live and let live.! 


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Who am I 
To tell you my everything 
You are you, 
And you are what you bring
 
Who am I, 
To tell you how to react 
You are you, 
And you know how you want to act
 
Who am I
To tell you how to raise your child 
You are you
And if you like you can raise them wild
 
Who am I 
To tell you what to wear 
You are you 
I can't make you cut your hair
 
Who am I 
To tell you what you should give 
You are you 
Who am I to say how you should live

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/2/2018 11:24:00 AM
hello Charles, I so agree with your written poem. Yes it makes sense to me. have a nice daymy friend.
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Date: 5/2/2018 12:25:00 PM
Hello dear friend, yes, live and let live :-) Enjoy your day Darlene. Thanks for reading...Charlie
Date: 4/25/2018 11:04:00 AM
Hello Charlie, as I read this poem, I realize the message it has. You make a good point. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/25/2018 1:58:00 PM
Your welcome my friend.
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Date: 4/25/2018 11:11:00 AM
Hello Darlene, Thanks for reading and understanding. You too my friend. Have a wonderful day!
Date: 4/25/2018 8:55:00 AM
Hey Charles. Lucid writing and real theme. Creative write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/25/2018 9:00:00 AM
Hello Samuel, my friend from a far away land. Thanks for reading and your kind words.. All the best !
Date: 4/25/2018 8:10:00 AM
Oh it s a really nice and creative write, really enjoyed reading this, but don t you think that sometimes giving opinions to others is a nice thing? Especially when someone is confused about their lives,
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:25:00 AM
Hi Faraz, yes absolutely...that's why in my notes I said "There are exceptions...Taking advice from others is a good thing, as long as the advice is in truth and truly comes from one's heart in good intentions. It is also a good thing to give advise as long as it's advice and not persuasion.. Charlie
Date: 4/24/2018 3:06:00 PM
Wonderful write. Very creative and imaginative. It rings of truth. Best of luck.
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Date: 4/24/2018 6:42:00 PM
Hey Frank, thanks for the read and your kind words. Truth be told..!! Nice to meet you my friend. All the best...Charlie