You Are the One

l. Opening the closet of narra doors, I sweep through organza skirts and gemmed ringlets; my hair ruffling aimlessly upon scalloped kerchiefs smelling decade - old hyacinth, Mom’s favorite ambrosia: she would lift her anklets in tiptoed hums, ”night and day, you are the one..” Evenings touched her candle hands; hands that soothed wounded knees from jackstone fights; her fingers caressing a pony -tailed girl’s wrath with piano keys rippling into a gentle moan; “night and day you are the one…” And i am delivered from my tempestuous rants. ll. From nowhere, the porcelain mirror gazed at me; her rhythm of silence billows, cradling my nights with each veil of her almond eyes that enter into my irises: a serene sight too close, much too tight I clung to her unspoken word. Through years, I grew like a bamboo shoot: her quiet smiles and music walked me through reality’s maze. And how I would wail bearing the grim of hard study, coughing late, late hours of reading toil…yet, she stayed like a moth with charm flushed in a wind of calm gaze, ebbing . lll. And only Mom could melt my temper when my raging soul paused to wonder at her light’s glow: oh, her feminine beat illumined more lamplights dancing inside this rebellious head… and now, she hovers around me. I become her eyes, chanting, “night and day, you are the one” ; never balking at my surreal conquests. She is gone bequeathing warmth into my torched flights without question; with much love dripping from her graceful movement, straying all through these my breaths: “night and day, you are the one…” Best Sad Poem Ever Contest of Laura Loo Resubmitted 8/28/2016

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Date: 8/30/2016 9:31:00 AM
Nette, this is just beautiful--well-deserving of that top win! Janice
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Date: 8/30/2016 3:34:00 AM
This is so sad and moving Nette. We can't go back in time, only through memory as you have done. This is so deserving of your top win! Congratulations!; ) 7
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Date: 8/30/2016 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations. This is heartfelt, makes me feel it and a wonderful tribute to your mother. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 8/29/2016 2:39:00 PM
Wonderful, touching poem..Congratulations..Larry
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Date: 8/29/2016 1:00:00 PM
Hi Nette, You have penned such a touching story. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/29/2016 12:16:00 PM
As tender as a mothers love, congratulations Nette...
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Date: 8/29/2016 12:10:00 PM
Touching Nette...so much emotions embedded in your write. Great work!Congrats on 1st place :) Sunita
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Date: 8/29/2016 11:11:00 AM
What a wonderful, deeply moving tribute to your mother, Nette. Congrats on your win. Agnes
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Date: 8/29/2016 10:00:00 AM
Nette, this touched me deeply lady...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
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Date: 12/29/2015 11:57:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 12/28/2015 10:36:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations in Judy Konos contest... wuv SKAT
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Date: 7/16/2015 7:03:00 PM
This has a magical quality, congratulations Nette.
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Date: 7/15/2015 4:07:00 PM
AMAzING !!!! Dear Nette. I am simply blown away by this masterpiece of writing. Elaine
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Date: 7/14/2015 8:27:00 PM
Nette, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/14/2015 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2015 2:02:00 AM
Nette, Congrats in Carol's story poem win. always ~~ LINDA ~~
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:16:00 AM
Nette, wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 7/13/2015 1:34:00 PM
Simply breathtaking poem Nette congrats on your win:-)hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:46:00 PM
Yes, this is descriptive so much so, I feel I am there. Awesome write.
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:28:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning and brilliant! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/20/2014 5:40:00 AM
Lovely and heartfelt poem on mommy. Congrats on the fine win, nette
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Date: 3/19/2014 5:30:00 PM
Nette, A tender loving write... :) Congratulations, with your winning poem, --A very touching topic, sponsored by the Awesome and Sweet Leonora-- Sending hugs ~LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 1:44:00 PM
Congrats Nette! When I first commented on this poem I had no doubt it would do well, and I've been proved right :) // paul
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations Nette... !!! a very heartfelt piece for your mom..so lovely!!! .. ^__^
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Date: 3/19/2014 10:54:00 AM
This is a great poem for your mom my very dear friend Nette. Congratulations! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest! Love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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