You Are My Sun

1.
When all of our days of toil, they are done, 
and peaceful dreams of love do come to our mind, 
I find my way to you, you are my sun, 
in my peaceful dreams, my love I shall find

And there you are by the ocean of love, 
a golden delight by the ocean blue, 
come, my beloved, to heaven above, 
where tonight, I share love’s own dream with you.

My golden star, in beauty how you shine, 
for you, my heart does sing love’s lullabye, 
my beloved, you are ever divine, 
come into my arms and here we shall lie.

The door of my heart opens when you smile, 
to your glory, my heart does reconcile.
2.
Love is the glory that we two do share, 
come into my arms and gold I do hold, 
to you my love, there is none can compare, 
in dream, the story of our love is told.

My golden queen, in love, your heart does sing, 
I now find your glory here in my arms, 
I know the love that you surely shall bring, 
before golden sun, I shall know your charms.

Your temple leaning so tight into me, 
lips that are divine, meet mine in a kiss, 
in no other place would I long to be, 
than here within your arms, feeling such bliss.

Your love whispers on the breath of a sigh, 
never between us shall there be a goodbye.
3.
Now be with me on the warm golden sand, 
I caress your glory in love’s embrace, 
our love now displayed and I understand, 
I hold divine wonder, within your grace.

Your eyes smile into mine, singing there song, 
I lose myself in their light  which does shine, 
before your glory, I always belong, 
I am your love and you are ever mine. 

In the warmth of the sun, our love displayed, 
we now shine together, a living sun,
in primal passion our desires arrayed, 
we are together until night is done.

Together we lie, held in love’s embrace, 
I see my all in your beautiful face.
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Baker Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 6:59 AM
Looks like I'm going to have to start a FAV's list of your poem, Mike. Everyone I read is a FAV. This one / 3, is in my favorite form. Sonnet poetry is my favorite to read and write. The flow of your words are rhythmic and soothing. Exquisite form my friend. The dance of love seems to come naturally to you and your love poems. I'll be back to read more soon, Bill
Raven Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 10:27 AM
Hi Bill, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the work. I like writing these groups of Sonnets. They give me joy through the writing and that's what is important I guess, to get joy out of what we do. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend ..... Mike.
Kalita Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 5:53 PM
A beautiful aesthetic sonnet, reminds me of the romantic era of 18th Century.. Splendid
Raven Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 11:31 AM
Hi Silpika, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Have you ever felt that you don't belong in this time? I think that often and when |I get the chance I try to write in the style of another era. What makes one happy, as I often say. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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August 5, 2022 at 8:01 AM
An eternal romantic who writes ecstatic love poems, eternal ones which can be seen in each others eyes, the most passionate love is in her eyes which reflect back to you her most loving innermost thoughts - A love story of infinite insatiable desires. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Foster Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 9:31 AM
your eyes smile into mine... oh yes... powerful... Well done full of excellent lines... Imagery incredible. Ann
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 4:09 PM
a very beautiful trio of love sonnets, Vlad. Ones to be proud of.
Romios Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 2:18 PM
Hi Mike! Have you ever thought of publishing your poetry? I think it’s really really terrific! I can feel this poem! Panagiota xxx
Raven Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Hi Panagiota, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I always like writing these groups of Sonnets. At the moment I haven't thought of publishing but the time may come. Takes me a while to think on such things. Thank you for asking, though. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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July 28, 2022 at 11:43 AM
- As always beautiful and romantic, Mike - Take care ... hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 2:57 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am so glad to be back. I love writing these groups of Sonnets. I still get the same joy out of writing love. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
Tor Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 6:14 PM
Mike your heart and romantic side is expressed wonderfully in this loving Poetry of your. Your heart shows the love you feel and you express it perfectly. God bless you my friend and keep on writing...
Raven Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 1:56 PM
Hi Michael, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is always appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I do love writing these groups of Sonnets. The heart is ever ready to sing the song of love. God bless you. Keep up the good work. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend ..... Mike.
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July 27, 2022 at 5:41 PM
A soft and sweet penning Mike. Love the last line - says it all. Linda
Raven Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 1:14 PM
Hi Linda, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I always like writing these groups of Sonnets. They carry the romance. As always Linda, the love is still singing. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugss always ..... Mike. XX
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