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You Are My Savior

When soft sudden bursts of buds begin, I look to you in reverence and pray. You are my Savior, my Spring day. When sultry sunlight scorches the sand I welcome you with outstretched arm. You are my Savior, my Summer charm. When wild whistling winds whirl into town I ask your guidance as supplicant sinner. You are my Savior, my Autumn mentor. When waxen whispers wane through the air I hear your voice with grateful ear. You are my Savior, my Winter cheer. 9/20/2020 ALLITERATION REGARDING RELATIONSHIP WITH GOD Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/30/2020 4:51:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your faith through this divine poetic testimony of yours, echoing your vibrant and sweet relationship with the Lord. All your lines give reverberating joy to the spirit; and I especially delight in your season-inspired description of the Saviour's role in your life. God bless you.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/30/2020 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Beata. I particularly enjoyed writing this one. It made me happy. :) You host such lovely contests. I appreciate being able to participate. Again, thank you! Linda

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 9/29/2020 9:06:00 AM

Congratulations for your top win in this beautiful poem, Linda. I love the seasonal theme.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/29/2020 9:16:00 AM

Oh so many thanks Carol! Linda

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/29/2020 8:44:00 AM

This is just lovely, Linda - so tender. I love the movement through the seasons and the way you set up the repetition of the phrase at the end of each stanza. So wonderful to see this on the podium. Congratulations. Many blessings to you!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/29/2020 8:51:00 AM

Many thanks Sam. I appreciate your encouraging comments and blessings. Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2020 2:30:00 PM

wow, you did such a great job with this challenge, both the message aND the alliteration!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/20/2020 3:21:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! I enjoyed writing this one. Linda