Linda Alice Fowler Poet Alliteration

You Are My Savior

When soft sudden bursts of buds begin,
I look to you in reverence and pray. 
     You are my Savior, my Spring day.

When sultry sunlight scorches the sand 		
I welcome you with outstretched arm.
     You are my Savior, my Summer charm.

When wild whistling winds whirl into town 	
I ask your guidance as supplicant sinner. 	
     You are my Savior, my Autumn mentor.		

When waxen whispers wane through the air 
I hear your voice with grateful ear. 
     You are my Savior, my Winter cheer.


9/20/2020
ALLITERATION REGARDING RELATIONSHIP WITH GOD Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Beata Agustin September 30, 2020 at 4:51 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing your faith through this divine poetic testimony of yours, echoing your vibrant and sweet relationship with the Lord. All your lines give reverberating joy to the spirit; and I especially delight in your season-inspired description of the Saviour's role in your life. God bless you. Linda Alice Fowler September 30, 2020 at 5:17 AM Thank you Beata. I particularly enjoyed writing this one. It made me happy. :) You host such lovely contests. I appreciate being able to participate. Again, thank you! Linda

Sam Kauffman September 29, 2020 at 8:44 AM This is just lovely, Linda - so tender. I love the movement through the seasons and the way you set up the repetition of the phrase at the end of each stanza. So wonderful to see this on the podium. Congratulations. Many blessings to you! Linda Alice Fowler September 29, 2020 at 8:51 AM Many thanks Sam. I appreciate your encouraging comments and blessings. Linda

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 2:30 PM wow, you did such a great job with this challenge, both the message aND the alliteration! Linda Alice Fowler September 20, 2020 at 3:21 PM Thank you Andrea! I enjoyed writing this one. Linda