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you are my sanity if you only knew how close to the brink I come how desperate I am for a rhyme a reason to go one for one more season hoping to survive let alone thrive you are my sanity you are my sanity no one else can see the demons that flay every good thought, every day tearing at my peace piece by piece what can I say I will the night hours away wondering if I will see the dawn of day demon free happy you make it be you are my sanity you are my sanity my anxiety you assuage "hush hush... Girl, I love you so much let it all go you gotta know I'm not running away I'm here to stay hey! Hey! It's...its' Ok" I slowly unwind in your arms I can find the meaning of kind You are my sanity You are my sanity I close my eyes tight I let go of every thought, every plight and feel you move rhythmic and strong to you I belong nothing makes sense but you bringing me life love that overcomes strife i'm whole and I'm well I'm in heaven not hell the cosmos is me and you're now setting me free Release! Look at me! believe! You are my sanity Eileen Manassian

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Date: 7/16/2017 11:58:00 AM
If this isn't love, I don't know what is... a great tribute Eileen:-)
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Date: 7/13/2017 12:27:00 PM
I love this poem, it's so meaningful and I can tell you put your whole entire soul into this. Great job, Eileen! :)
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Date: 7/12/2017 3:55:00 AM
Having a man to stand by you in all your ups and downs is truly a gift, Eileen. Understandably, his love and strength can be your sanity. Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/11/2017 9:36:00 AM
If this is a dedication to your daughter I am sure she is moved by it. A lovely piece.
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Date: 7/9/2017 1:17:00 PM
I love the personal touch of your essence in the imager ~*
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Date: 7/9/2017 11:30:00 AM
I Bet this is for Shereen....Good for both you.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/10/2017 8:19:00 PM
My only son is my sanity, my panacea, my cosmos.... without him I'm just a shadow..... The beauty is no matter how you look at your poem is Shereen.....
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/9/2017 12:54:00 PM
I see how you might have read that, dear Pashang, but this is about a lover. Thank you for dropping by. :)
Date: 7/8/2017 8:14:00 PM
beautifully expressed and so heartfelt that i could feel the emotion bursting forth. this is a gorgeous tribute, eileen...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/9/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thanks, dear Ilene. To me...love is what makes live worth living. <3
Date: 7/8/2017 2:47:00 PM
Heartfelt words that resonate and so romantic too. This is beautiful Eileen <3
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/9/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Sara. I appreciate your kind comment. Blessings.
Date: 7/8/2017 2:20:00 PM
Your thoughts, as always, come from deep within you, Eileen. Beautifully written.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/9/2017 9:27:00 AM
There is a little too much of me in every write. However, I know no other way to be. Thanks, dear.
Date: 7/8/2017 12:56:00 PM
What a wonderful tribute to your hubby in your poem - I love the repeated line, he is your rock and will always be there for you:-) hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/9/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thanks for the visit, Jan. Always good to spend time with you. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Hugs
Date: 7/8/2017 12:52:00 PM
Lucky fellow:) i love the structure and the flow of this poem,Eileen:)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/9/2017 9:28:00 AM
Awwww....how sweet, Daniel. Thank you. You are always good to me. Cheers.

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