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You Are My Moon

Sitting on the edge Of a river's flow I hear your tease Seducing my breeze Sprinkling moon-dust Caressing love Dreaming of a kiss In supernal bliss Composing music Of Milky Way symphony Taking starry stage Where orchestra plays Dancing the night Floating in the stream Navigating closer For heavenly encounter You are my moon My moon in the river April 21, 2018

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Valsa George

Date: 4/22/2022 6:25:00 AM

You are a great bard of romance ! There is that signature stamp in everything you write ! Beautiful .....

Paul Callus

Date: 3/3/2019 3:08:00 PM

Beautiful and romantic, Vijay....very poetical. Regards // paul

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/10/2018 10:57:00 AM

Hi Vijay, I have to second all Pandita has said. A journey through your words is a journey through emotions. You bring beauty from your heart and share it with such gentle ease. You are a true wordsmith. Long may your pen write such wonderful gold. Have a wonderful Saturday. your friend always....Mike.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/25/2018 8:23:00 AM

My friend, this is such an amazingly beautiful, romantic piece as only you know how to magically articulate! Written like a true master of words and emotions! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2018 2:30:00 PM

Thank you Pandita--appreciate and value your kind feedback.

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/23/2018 9:27:00 AM

Very beautiful, Vijay. It's amazing how love can inspire !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/23/2018 11:21:00 AM

Many thanks Mike.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/22/2018 1:35:00 AM

Romantic reflection of a heart dreaming of the object of his love. Excellent dear, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/22/2018 7:02:00 AM

Many thanks Demetrios.

James Swartz

Date: 4/21/2018 7:40:00 PM

Another Vijay romantic classic!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/22/2018 7:02:00 AM

Many thanks James.

Jean Murray

Date: 4/21/2018 6:04:00 PM

What a teasing moon, so close and yet so far.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/22/2018 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Jean.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2018 5:46:00 PM

I really like this, It has smooth flow and is so pretty!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/22/2018 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/21/2018 3:27:00 PM

I love this. Beautifully written Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/21/2018 4:39:00 PM

Thank you Heidi..haven't seen you in a while in this space.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/21/2018 12:27:00 PM

Very beautiful... My dear friend, In order to see your moon, you have to be the sun...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/26/2018 1:09:00 AM

I meant every word...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/21/2018 3:05:00 PM

Thank you friend..thanks for the visit and kind feedback, Pashang.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/21/2018 10:45:00 AM

Very imaginative...moon in the river...Mr.Romantic...All the best...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/21/2018 3:04:00 PM

Many thanks Arturo--appreciate your feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/21/2018 8:00:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Vijay :) - Give me a beautiful picture - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/21/2018 9:34:00 AM

Always delighted by your visit Anne-Lise..thank you for your kind feedback.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/21/2018 7:27:00 AM

This is a beautiful romantic piece of work Vijay ~ you are a true romanticist. It's sensually and elegantly earthly, celestially buoyant - musically and rhythmically uplifting. I was transported through the poem on an orchestral cloud where the strains of 'Moon River' came to mind. ( I cheated and read the end first). This is going into my FAVE list. Hugs Maria :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/21/2018 9:34:00 AM

I'm always happy to read your comments..very supportive you are my friend..many many thanks, Maria.

Christopher Goss

Date: 4/21/2018 7:20:00 AM

Fantastic

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/21/2018 9:32:00 AM

Many thanks Christopher...appreciate your visit and kind remark.