Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

You Are My Moon

Sitting on the edge
Of a river's flow
I hear your tease
Seducing my breeze

Sprinkling moon-dust
Caressing love
Dreaming of a kiss
In supernal bliss

Composing music
Of Milky Way symphony
Taking starry stage
Where orchestra plays 

Dancing the night
Floating in the stream
Navigating closer
For heavenly encounter

You are my moon
My moon in the river

April 21, 2018

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Valsa George April 22, 2022 at 6:25 AM You are a great bard of romance ! There is that signature stamp in everything you write ! Beautiful .....

Paul Callus March 3, 2019 at 3:08 PM Beautiful and romantic, Vijay....very poetical. Regards // paul

Vladislav Raven November 10, 2018 at 10:57 AM Hi Vijay, I have to second all Pandita has said. A journey through your words is a journey through emotions. You bring beauty from your heart and share it with such gentle ease. You are a true wordsmith. Long may your pen write such wonderful gold. Have a wonderful Saturday. your friend always....Mike.

Pandita Sietesantos April 25, 2018 at 8:23 AM My friend, this is such an amazingly beautiful, romantic piece as only you know how to magically articulate! Written like a true master of words and emotions! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita Vijay Pandit April 27, 2018 at 2:30 PM Thank you Pandita--appreciate and value your kind feedback.

Mike Gentile April 23, 2018 at 9:27 AM Very beautiful, Vijay. It's amazing how love can inspire !!! Vijay Pandit April 23, 2018 at 11:21 AM Many thanks Mike.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 22, 2018 at 1:35 AM Romantic reflection of a heart dreaming of the object of his love. Excellent dear, Vijay! Vijay Pandit April 22, 2018 at 7:02 AM Many thanks Demetrios.

James Swartz April 21, 2018 at 7:40 PM Another Vijay romantic classic! Vijay Pandit April 22, 2018 at 7:02 AM Many thanks James.

Jean Murray April 21, 2018 at 6:04 PM What a teasing moon, so close and yet so far. Vijay Pandit April 22, 2018 at 7:01 AM Thank you Jean.

Andrea Dietrich April 21, 2018 at 5:46 PM I really like this, It has smooth flow and is so pretty! Vijay Pandit April 22, 2018 at 7:01 AM Thank you Andrea.

Heidi Sands April 21, 2018 at 3:27 PM I love this. Beautifully written Vijay :) Vijay Pandit April 21, 2018 at 4:39 PM Thank you Heidi..haven't seen you in a while in this space.

Pashang Salehi April 21, 2018 at 12:27 PM Very beautiful... My dear friend, In order to see your moon, you have to be the sun... Pashang Salehi April 26, 2018 at 1:09 AM I meant every word... Vijay Pandit April 21, 2018 at 3:05 PM Thank you friend..thanks for the visit and kind feedback, Pashang.

Arturo Michael April 21, 2018 at 10:45 AM Very imaginative...moon in the river...Mr.Romantic...All the best... Vijay Pandit April 21, 2018 at 3:04 PM Many thanks Arturo--appreciate your feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2018 at 8:00 AM - Beautiful poem, Vijay :) - Give me a beautiful picture - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit April 21, 2018 at 9:34 AM Always delighted by your visit Anne-Lise..thank you for your kind feedback.

Maria Williams April 21, 2018 at 7:27 AM This is a beautiful romantic piece of work Vijay ~ you are a true romanticist. It's sensually and elegantly earthly, celestially buoyant - musically and rhythmically uplifting. I was transported through the poem on an orchestral cloud where the strains of 'Moon River' came to mind. ( I cheated and read the end first). This is going into my FAVE list. Hugs Maria :) Vijay Pandit April 21, 2018 at 9:34 AM I'm always happy to read your comments..very supportive you are my friend..many many thanks, Maria.

Christopher Goss April 21, 2018 at 7:20 AM Fantastic Vijay Pandit April 21, 2018 at 9:32 AM Many thanks Christopher...appreciate your visit and kind remark.