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You Are My Heart You Are My Soul

"I will set you on my breath so YOU will become my life." Rumi Inside this temple made of brick and clay the many shades of your heart are the prisms of my soul Pinioned and shackled to your fires we are vaulted by our own desires two lovers breathing as one Inhale me as you were to inhale a rose take this stem without thorns and press it to your bosom, LOVE* For you are my heart and your are my soul pleasing you thus my only goal.

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/16/2023 6:05:00 AM

Oh my, this is such a magical and heavenly poem with romantic aura that swirls in the true purity of love.. When love like this makes us feel the presence of heaven on earth and the connection of two souls, beyond time, ahh, that's actually a rare treasure of an emotion and so profound to feel.. Wow.. I'm so in awe of this beautiful write, gosh, love this so much, dear Sara, a fav :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/16/2023 1:39:00 AM

Very beautiful, Vie; romantic and spiritual at the same time -- the Spirit of Love. Most profound and therefore, eternal. Ever binding.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/16/2023 4:22:00 AM

Most profoundly we love and embrace and find our strength and persona in the one we choose to love. God Almighty first, thanks for reading Joe, have a blessed day my friend :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/15/2023 5:12:00 PM

Such a beautiful and romantic tribute to love, my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/16/2023 4:22:00 AM

Hi Jerry, glad you enjoyed the verse. A tribute to love, and the journey that we embark in, when we fall in love, strength always follows :)

Tom Woody

Date: 12/15/2023 4:46:00 PM

Awesome tribute... To hubby? I've never read Rumi. Better get on the stick

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/16/2023 4:21:00 AM

A tribute to love and anyone who has ever touched my heart, yes please check out Rumi, you'll be amazed I'm sure Tom, take care, thanks for the visit. :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/15/2023 3:54:00 PM

a softly passionate and romantic poem or perhaps a passion love and appreciation for God (this temple made of brick). Not sure which or perhaps both. God is love seems to be the choice going by what you bolded. Nevertheless, this poem is a subtle masterpiece...am faving it! hug, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/16/2023 4:21:00 AM

Hello Sara, how precious to read your words, and thank you for faving it, blessings from my heart to yours :)

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2023 11:41:00 AM

Great quote my Rumi... A lovely poem about God and you can sense that God is within us and inspires us to be who we are...

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/16/2023 4:20:00 AM

Yes I quote your Rumi, our Rumi and mine too, lol, he was made of air and water definitely not brick, maybe clay ? thanks for reading dear friend, have a happy day

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/15/2023 6:00:00 AM

So wonderfully heartfelt and romantic! Much enjoyed your poem, Vienna.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/16/2023 4:19:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed the poem Vijay, love gives us wings every time.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/15/2023 5:53:00 AM

Gosh, how beautiful is this and so romantic and has a very passionate touch, I absolutely love romance like this that makes my heart skip few beats. Rosy and gorgeous. I especially loved “ Inhale me as you were to inhale a rose take this stem without thorns” wow!! A fave this is for me. Pleasure always reading your work

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/16/2023 4:19:00 AM

When we are in love the strength of our romance can take us to the Gods dear Ink, may you always experience that kind of love on earth, if not on earth then in heaven, love :)