Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

You Are My Heart You Are My Soul

"I will set you on my breath so YOU will become my life."  Rumi 

Inside this temple made of brick and clay 
the many shades of your heart 
are the prisms of my soul 
Pinioned and shackled to your fires  
we are vaulted by our own desires 
two lovers breathing as one
 
Inhale me as you were to inhale a rose 
take this stem without thorns  
and press it to your bosom, LOVE*
For you are my heart
and your are my soul 
pleasing you thus my only goal.

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Hiya Sharma December 16, 2023 at 6:05 AM Oh my, this is such a magical and heavenly poem with romantic aura that swirls in the true purity of love.. When love like this makes us feel the presence of heaven on earth and the connection of two souls, beyond time, ahh, that's actually a rare treasure of an emotion and so profound to feel.. Wow.. I'm so in awe of this beautiful write, gosh, love this so much, dear Sara, a fav :)

Joseph P. DiMino December 16, 2023 at 1:39 AM Very beautiful, Vie; romantic and spiritual at the same time -- the Spirit of Love. Most profound and therefore, eternal. Ever binding. Mystic Rose Rose December 16, 2023 at 4:22 AM Most profoundly we love and embrace and find our strength and persona in the one we choose to love. God Almighty first, thanks for reading Joe, have a blessed day my friend :)

Jerry Brotherton December 15, 2023 at 5:12 PM Such a beautiful and romantic tribute to love, my friend. Mystic Rose Rose December 16, 2023 at 4:22 AM Hi Jerry, glad you enjoyed the verse. A tribute to love, and the journey that we embark in, when we fall in love, strength always follows :)

Silent One December 15, 2023 at 11:41 AM Great quote my Rumi... A lovely poem about God and you can sense that God is within us and inspires us to be who we are... Mystic Rose Rose December 16, 2023 at 4:20 AM Yes I quote your Rumi, our Rumi and mine too, lol, he was made of air and water definitely not brick, maybe clay ? thanks for reading dear friend, have a happy day

Vijay Pandit December 15, 2023 at 6:00 AM So wonderfully heartfelt and romantic! Much enjoyed your poem, Vienna. Mystic Rose Rose December 16, 2023 at 4:19 AM Glad you enjoyed the poem Vijay, love gives us wings every time.

Ink Empress December 15, 2023 at 5:53 AM Gosh, how beautiful is this and so romantic and has a very passionate touch, I absolutely love romance like this that makes my heart skip few beats. Rosy and gorgeous. I especially loved “ Inhale me as you were to inhale a rose take this stem without thorns” wow!! A fave this is for me. Pleasure always reading your work Mystic Rose Rose December 16, 2023 at 4:19 AM When we are in love the strength of our romance can take us to the Gods dear Ink, may you always experience that kind of love on earth, if not on earth then in heaven, love :)