Vijay Pandit Poet Sonnet

You Are Love

You're poetry that rhymes even in prose
Melody of your sound everyone knows
Who's seen the beauty of a gifted rose
And heard the lyrics of the wind that blows

You are the fragrance fresh flowers reveal
Like the gentle whiff of a tender kiss
And in your essence is joyful appeal
That evokes the charm of genuine bliss

You are the music from apex of thrill
That resonates wishes of every soul
You are a sweet dream of romantic will
And in its corner happily you stroll

Oh, how enchanting is glow of your fame
That ignites a blaze in sound of your name

March 9, 2019
Placed 2nd: What is love poetry contest. Sponsor: Silent One
Placed 3rd: 2019 best sonnet contest by John Hamilton
HM: Strand choice M contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George May 29, 2023 at 8:56 AM Deeply romantic and arrestingly charming . Any lover will be flattered by these lovely comparisons. A powerful sonnet !

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2020 at 4:03 PM I think I must not have been too focused the first time I read this one a while back. As I see it now, I feel like it is one of your very best, in my opinion. Gorgeous. Congrats on the HM. I got one too but your poem is better than mine! FAVE

Sam Kauffman March 21, 2020 at 10:57 PM So creative. Lovely language in your oh so romantic sonnett. A great poetic form for your sonnet. Congratulations!

John Hamilton January 1, 2020 at 1:31 PM Really nice sonnet, congrats Vijay on a nice third place win!

Panagiota Romios June 4, 2019 at 5:07 AM Lovely, beyond any words I can say. And you are always a winner to me Panagiota

Brandy Nicole May 9, 2019 at 8:34 PM As your title states "You are love" and of course, a Winner. Congratulations Vijay. :) Brandy

Carole Duet May 8, 2019 at 10:20 PM This is so lovely and romantic, Vijay. Congrats on your placement in the contest.

Silent One May 8, 2019 at 1:13 PM Congratulations on your placement in the what is love contest..

Pandita Sietesantos May 2, 2019 at 8:45 PM Oh what a lovely sonnet you have penned, my dear friend! This is the kind I only wish I could write! Simply magnificent! Hugs. Pandita

Robert Lindley April 24, 2019 at 6:14 AM Another beautiful sonnet! A fav,, a gem too..

Robertina B. April 1, 2019 at 5:38 AM A glorious sonnett, Vijay.. Penned so beaufully and flows perfectly.. I enjoyed this !! A fave for me, my friend.. Have a blessed day!! Vijay Pandit April 1, 2019 at 8:39 AM Thank you Robertina--appreciate the kind remarks. Many thanks for the FAVE.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. March 25, 2019 at 7:54 AM wonderfully romantic. Love the metaphors Vijay Pandit March 27, 2019 at 7:56 AM Thank you Allen..appreciate your visit and comments.

Joanna Daniel March 17, 2019 at 8:41 AM A mind-blowing sonnet, Vijay:) Vijay Pandit March 18, 2019 at 7:49 AM Many thanks Jo..much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong March 17, 2019 at 2:20 AM This is an enchanting love sonnet Vijay. It should rate high in Silent's contest. xxoo Vijay Pandit March 17, 2019 at 7:13 AM Thank you Connie..appreciate your vote of confidence.

Mystic Rose Rose March 16, 2019 at 5:03 PM Every word is in perfect place, sweet sonnet, its music to my ears. Have a great day dear friend xo Vijay Pandit March 17, 2019 at 7:12 AM Thank you my friend..much appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Paul Callus March 16, 2019 at 4:16 PM I am sure that if Love were a woman she would melt with romantic bliss on reading these lines, Vijay! Beautiful! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit March 17, 2019 at 7:12 AM Thank you for the kind remarks Paul..much appreciate your visit and comments.

Carolyn Devonshire March 16, 2019 at 10:57 AM I adore the way you define love, Vijay! "Poetry that rhymes even in prose" grabbed my attention immediately. Then the fragrance and the music that resonates in souls -- Wonderful sonnet, my friend. Best wishes in Silent One's contest! Hugs, carolyn Vijay Pandit March 17, 2019 at 7:11 AM I am happy to read your generous feedback. Much appreciate Carolyn..many thanks.

Nette Onclaud March 15, 2019 at 3:45 PM TGIF, vijay!....huggs Vijay Pandit March 15, 2019 at 5:35 PM Yes indeed..thanks, Nette.

CayCay Godwin March 15, 2019 at 1:14 PM This is beautiful, Vijay, a poem to be read more than once and linger with the beauty in imagery and flow. You wrote a gem! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Vijay Pandit March 15, 2019 at 5:34 PM Much appreciate CayCay..many thanks.

Harry Horsman March 14, 2019 at 4:41 PM Would love to walk within this wonderful poem, love it. Vijay Pandit March 14, 2019 at 5:13 PM Thank you Harry..much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos March 14, 2019 at 11:16 AM Beautiful, enchanting, romantic and and an excellent read - a very touching poem Vijay! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit March 14, 2019 at 5:12 PM Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback..many thanks, Jennifer.

Nette Onclaud March 12, 2019 at 1:48 PM and you are the bard of romance waxing sentimental, vijay... yes to this incredible melody!...huggs Vijay Pandit March 14, 2019 at 7:13 AM Thank you Nette.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 12, 2019 at 9:29 AM Jubilant penning Vijay! My best to you in the contest :) xomo Vijay Pandit March 14, 2019 at 7:12 AM Thank you Maureen..much appreciate your visit and comments.

Arturo Michael March 11, 2019 at 2:39 PM I can feel it...Wonderful Vijay... I think I will try this topic...All the best Vijay Pandit March 12, 2019 at 7:06 AM Will look forward to your new poem..many thanks Arturo.

Alexis Y. March 10, 2019 at 2:24 PM WoW! Vijay, Love spills over in this well written Sonett. I enjoyed from start to finish. Great content and imagery. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit March 11, 2019 at 7:58 AM I'm delighted to read your kind feedback Alexis. Thank you for the detailed comments. Appreciate as always.

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