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You Are Killing Me

It’s like a sea wave Is fiercely striking my skin, I can feel the pain Sniffing the air to breath Trying to survive the wave… Grasping anywhere The humidity is high It is choking me I can’t breathe, I cannot grasp You are killing me softly…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/22/2017 7:22:00 AM
- A pain great described, Eiza - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eiza Evangelista
Date: 7/2/2017 10:49:00 PM
thank you! :* ^_^
Date: 3/9/2017 5:12:00 AM
Nice Tanka indeed ... Rich feeling in air and wave ... breathlessness vivid ...
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Eiza Evangelista
Date: 7/2/2017 10:49:00 PM
hehehe thanks ^_^
Date: 3/9/2017 2:06:00 AM
Powerful. Great write.
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Eiza Evangelista
Date: 7/2/2017 10:48:00 PM
thank you! ^_^

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