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Where’s my Halloween candy brother? You ate it right? Don’t give me that look, It was you for sure! Now I’ve warned you before, Only last week! You eat my candy and it will happen! You know what ‘it’ means! Tied up and locked in the shed With a sock in your mouth Forced against your will, To listen to Justin Bieber!! And don't think Mom and Dad can save you!! If I were your brother Poetry contest Sponsor - Bobby May Date of entry - 29/10/19

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Date: 11/4/2019 11:20:00 AM
That sounds more like torture to me, with or without the sock. : ) Congrats on your win Ron.
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 11/4/2019 3:10:00 PM
Yep, doesn't get any more torturous in my book!! Thanks Chris...Ron :)
Date: 11/2/2019 9:17:00 AM
Hahaha, great punishment. Congrats on your win. Hugs
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Date: 11/1/2019 7:11:00 PM
lol this was comical...bet he thought twice about stealing candy again...congratulations on your top win :)
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Date: 11/1/2019 7:21:00 PM
Thanks Sandra. Best wishes..Ron xx
Date: 11/1/2019 5:58:00 AM
Love the Justin Beiber line. Great job Ronald. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Charlie
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 11/1/2019 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Charles - appreciated! Ronald
Date: 10/30/2019 6:00:00 PM
anything but Justin Bieber lol , that is a punishment for sure lol, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/30/2019 6:31:00 PM
Thanks Jan....Ron xx
Date: 10/30/2019 12:23:00 PM
Hello Ronald D. Thompson, now your brother is in for it. Have a nice day my friend. XXX,
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Date: 10/30/2019 5:07:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. Hope all is well...Ron xx
Date: 10/30/2019 9:31:00 AM
'Forced to listen to Justin Bieber?!' ---Oh, no! Not that! Anything but that, please! Send me to a 'Youth Nursing Home!' Please, please, please... Ha, ha! Love it, Ron! And congrats on your first-place finish in Bobby's contest. Way to go, my friend. Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 10/30/2019 5:07:00 PM
Thank you kind Sir....Ron
Date: 10/30/2019 8:58:00 AM
- He just has to admit it :) - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Ronald :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 10/30/2019 5:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise. xx
Date: 10/30/2019 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Ronald
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 10/30/2019 5:11:00 PM
Many thanks Bobby. Very honoured to be have chosen a 1st. Ron

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