You Are In For It

Where’s my Halloween candy brother?
You ate it right?
Don’t give me that look,
It was you for sure!

Now I’ve warned you before,
Only last week!
You eat my candy and it will happen!
You know what ‘it’ means!

Tied up and locked in the shed
With a sock in your mouth
Forced against your will,
To listen to Justin Bieber!!

And don't think Mom and Dad can save you!!

If I were your brother Poetry contest
Sponsor - Bobby May
Date of entry - 29/10/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 4, 2019 at 11:20 AM
That sounds more like torture to me, with or without the sock. : ) Congrats on your win Ron.
Thompson Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 3:10 PM
Yep, doesn't get any more torturous in my book!! Thanks Chris...Ron :)
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November 2, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Hahaha, great punishment. Congrats on your win. Hugs
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November 1, 2019 at 7:11 PM
lol this was comical...bet he thought twice about stealing candy again...congratulations on your top win :)
Thompson Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Thanks Sandra. Best wishes..Ron xx
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November 1, 2019 at 5:58 AM
Love the Justin Beiber line. Great job Ronald. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Charlie
Thompson Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 2:50 PM
Thanks Charles - appreciated! Ronald
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 6:00 PM
anything but Justin Bieber lol , that is a punishment for sure lol, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Thompson Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Thanks Jan....Ron xx
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October 30, 2019 at 12:23 PM
Hello Ronald D. Thompson, now your brother is in for it. Have a nice day my friend. XXX,
Thompson Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:07 PM
Thank you Darlene. Hope all is well...Ron xx
Wolf Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:31 AM
'Forced to listen to Justin Bieber?!' ---Oh, no! Not that! Anything but that, please! Send me to a 'Youth Nursing Home!' Please, please, please... Ha, ha! Love it, Ron! And congrats on your first-place finish in Bobby's contest. Way to go, my friend. Warmest wishes, Gershon
Thompson Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:07 PM
Thank you kind Sir....Ron
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October 30, 2019 at 8:58 AM
- He just has to admit it :) - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Ronald :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Thompson Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:12 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise. xx
May Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on your win Ronald
Thompson Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Many thanks Bobby. Very honoured to be have chosen a 1st. Ron
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