You and That Candle

I
you are not the candle, but the candlelight

II
As candlelight, you may smoke, go left or right, but pattern of light, is you
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 12:20 PM
I love your line, "you are not the candle, but the candlelight." It is so pretty. Have a great day..................
Deo Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 9:20 PM
I meant Valsa Ji, or Valsa G. Both work, but the Text Editor must be American, LOL.
George Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 8:20 PM
Beautiful and highly symbolic Anil !
Deo Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 9:19 PM
Nice of you to visit & leave a kind comment, Valsa Hi. Shalom shalom
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