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You and I

This poem is my attempt at something a little more... racy. This is not exactly my forte, and I hope you guys will be kind with your comments (lol) Eyes closed, Heart beating strong arms enclosing me. lips so tender and soft grazing mine, ever so lightly... gentle...slow... soft music, a dark room. The smell of you and i. Chests rising, breaths racing, gasping, panting, sweating. your fingers in my hair, lips on my neck. one magical, endless moment, eyes closed, you lie beside me. breathing in the smell of you and I

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Date: 8/2/2016 3:15:00 PM
Hi Angie...I will give you a 7 for this 'racy' poem which you ably tackled without overstepping the line! You did well not to give away too much, leaving space for the reader to fill in the blanks! ~ Regards // paul
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