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You and I

Alone to night just you and I
Behind this veil of thick cold mist
Captivating in this enchanted magical night
Dancing in the blessed lovers rhythm
Enveloped in the ultimate pleasure the world beyond
Fervor in ecstasy









in the contest > ABC poem about love

Copyright © Manel Gunatillake | Year Posted 2013

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Edward Orozco Date: 6/7/2013 11:32:00 PM Great piece!!! Well written- Edward Login to Reply

Sasha Maharaj Date: 6/6/2013 2:22:00 AM its beautiful Manel :) i hope u are well. *hugs* mwaah Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 6/6/2013 9:44:00 PM i am partly Ok. Just a back ache. I use the lap top these days on my bed. Nothing serious. Old age. ha! ha! Thanks my love Thank for your concern visit. Hugs!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/5/2013 4:58:00 PM such passion in this one Manel, very much enjoyed this one, ~always, Linda Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 6/6/2013 9:46:00 PM Thank you my dearest PD. I like you this way better

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/3/2013 5:40:00 PM NICELY done, Manel. Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 6/3/2013 8:17:00 PM Thank you dear Andrea

Therese Bacha Date: 6/3/2013 11:21:00 AM That is beautifully expressed, God bless you both. LOve it. a 7>>>> Terry xo Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 6/3/2013 11:46:00 AM thank you Therese.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/3/2013 7:52:00 AM You are a true romantic! Well done. Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 6/3/2013 11:46:00 AM thank you Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/3/2013 4:36:00 AM - Hey my friend Manel. - This is beautiful!! - It will come high up on the winning list - Good luck! - Have a beautiful day - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 6/3/2013 4:42:00 AM Thank you my deaerest Anne.

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/3/2013 4:07:00 AM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in the contest..Sara Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 6/3/2013 4:43:00 AM Thank you, my dearest Sara

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/3/2013 12:58:00 AM Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 6/3/2013 4:43:00 AM Thank you my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/2/2013 4:17:00 PM That is pure magic of a romantic verse! Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 6/2/2013 11:49:00 PM Thank you my friend Demetrios.