You and I

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Destiny has tethered your heart to mine, not by chance circumstance but by design. For echoes of lives past connect our souls, guiding fated footsteps toward shared goals. Your essence gets absorbed by my being, and my anxieties are sent fleeing. I feel your presence in all that I do, you are my past, present, and future too. Your scent sweetens my memories and dreams like a seductive pheromone, it seems. You burn like an insatiable desire igniting passion's flame; you're the fire. You're my muse, my love, my hope, and my friend, such love lives forever; there is no end. We'll always find each other, you and I; our love will outlast the stars in the sky.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2022 5:08:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this winner. Way to go. Congratulations on your name being on the winners' list. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/19/2022 7:25:00 AM

Thanks, Sara, as always. I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 8/17/2022 2:15:00 PM

Emile, a beautiful write and poem, and congratulations on your placement ~Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/17/2022 5:47:00 PM

Thanks, Constance, your comments are always most welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/12/2022 11:51:00 PM

Love is everything Emile. I feel sad for anyone who has not felt the experience. I feel very fortunate. Your poem was inspiring and beautiful. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/13/2022 7:58:00 AM

Thanks, Connie, as always. I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/31/2022 12:55:00 PM

This is such a beautiful poem expressing your deep love, Emile. And, you are so right, a love like this does "outlast the stars in the sky." I hope you will share it with your special someone!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/1/2022 7:36:00 AM

This is soooo true, Emile. And, I don't think anyone can really understand the word until one has experienced it.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/31/2022 2:14:00 PM

Thanks, Milt, I appreciate your comments, as always. Love is but a word until you experience it, and then it becomes everything, my friend, Emile.